| "Swords and Fangs" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Superanimegurl! On: June 18, 2003 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! IF you aren't going to put up the the remaining chapters, then what the HELL was the point of actually writing this fic? Don't make me get all crazy. Oh well, I guess for now I'll have to kinda sorta read sumthin' else.
On a lighter note, I really did enjoy this fan fic. It's creative and fresh. Something only a true genius would think of. . . unless you've seen too much of Mosquiton. NEwayz, have a good time, and plz put up the rest of the fic!! |
Reviewed By: Shewolf On: January 23, 2003 20:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Totally nifty!. I think so far this is a great story I hope to read more soon! |
Reviewed By: Saffron On: November 21, 2002 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEKKKKKKK!!!!!! What's gonna happen to Hikaru and Umi???? Most of all, WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN TO FUU?!? It's great but, the stories are somewhat short. Plz update ASAP...Ciao(^_~) |
Reviewed By: ryoku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2002 23:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE it it's one of my favorates!!!! KEP GOING!!!! |
Reviewed By: Firestorm_244 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2002 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I read the first two chapters here on Media Miner then I went to FFN to read the rest of the chapters up to 10. I gotta say, it gets better as your fic progresses. I would have reviewed this at FFN but there's only 2 reviews here so... well Basically I'm saying interesting story, I can't wait till you write more, you should post the other chapters that you've writen here and also that I'm now inspired to write a Rayearth AU fic which I probably won't get around to writing for a while... Again good job. Write more! |
Reviewed By: moran On: December 28, 2001 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far this story is great and please update fast i usually hate it when writters leave you off!!
i usually get nightmares if i don't know whet will happen next!!
suppense will kill me!!
must read more!!! ^_^! |
Reviewed By: Umi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2001 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't take those lower scores as something bad. I did like this overall. The idea is interesting. I can't even put my finger on what exactly is wrong with it. One big thing is you move quickly and don't elaborate on anything. The whole conversation between the Vampire Hunters (I think that's what they're called) seemed rushed. Umi changes her viewpoint very quickly.
There were also some typo mistakes, which didn't really bother me too much. Your chapters are short, but I shouldn't really be talking, should I?
Overall, it's good, just needs a little tweaking. |
