| "Blood Stone" Reviews/Comments [ 117 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nabi-chan On: March 07, 2003 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo and Hilde deserve each other, they're both jerks! I'm sure the battle between Heero and Relena will be great. Can't wait to read the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: EM On: March 07, 2003 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Relena! Don't take any crap from Heero. Besides Heero can't really hurt her since his dad's still alive. Though he might not care. Oh, addicting plot! |
Reviewed By: Dragonrose On: March 07, 2003 16:36 CST
Comment/Review:
I am soooo glad that you're updating pretty quickly. The first thing I did when I got online was check this story. I can't believe Duo was being such a jerk. I still can't see why the bastard likes Hilde. I hate her guts! It's wonderful how you can make people feel so strongly about the characters in your fics. I did want to say that I think Mariemaia is the correct spelling - I got it off the Gundam Official website. I think Hilde is correct, too. Also, was Heero spying on Relena? If so, I bet he admits his feelings soon. Maybe a kiss instead of a bloody nose at the end of their fight? Although I'd be perfectly happy if he kissed her and then she punched him, the insensitive jerk! |
Reviewed By: ALL CAPS On: March 07, 2003 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL, THINGS ARE GETTING MORE INTERESTING. I DOUBT HEERO'S GOING TO KILL RELENA. TRY TO MAYBE. YOU SURE WOULDN'T HAVE MUCH OF A STORY IF HE DID! BUT HE SORT OF WANTS HER TO. STRANGE COUPLE. |
Reviewed By: Kaoru Himura On: March 07, 2003 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fight, fight, fight! I know Heero will probably kick Relena's butt, but I hope she gives him hell first. Maybe he won't beat her up at all...maybe something else will happen. -_~ |
Reviewed By: Misao Soup On: March 06, 2003 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo is an ass! Needed to say that. What nerve! And Hilde's a hypocritical bitch in this. I normally love Hilde, but not in this. And the fight with Heero and Relena?! What a place to leave off! Man, this chapter was riveting and wild. |
Reviewed By: andy On: March 06, 2003 08:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sounds pretty foreboding the way Heero talked about Relena at the end. Doesn't sound good for her. And why are all the gals (Hilde, Sally, etc) all bitches! They were real nasty toward Relena. Still think Duo can do better than Hilde. Who am I kiddening, I only care about Heero and Relena hooking up!!! |
Reviewed By: Jace On: March 05, 2003 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHA? I CAN'T GET OVER THIS TERRIFIC STORY. AND I ENJOYED THE POSSESIVENESS HEERO'S SHOWING, EVEN IF HE ACTS LIKE A COMPLETE JERK TO RELENA. HE SHOULD BE CHASING HER, NOT THE OTHER WAY. BUT SOMETHING TELLS ME HE'S JUST WAITING FOR HIS FATHER TO DIE TO EITHER TRY TO KILL HER, KICK HER OUT OR MAKE HER HIS BITCH! |
Reviewed By: Dragonrose On: March 05, 2003 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like reading this fic, and I'm always on the lookout for updates on it or new stories by you. I think Blood Stone is well written and enjoyable, although I do wish we could have had more between chapters 2 and 3 on Relena growing up and Milliardo and Mariemaia's life together. And I'm kinda confused why such a great guy like Duo wants such a b*tch like Hilde. I think I also saw a few punctuation mistakes, but my English teacher has made me picky. I love your fics, especially this one, and I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: Dark Deity On: March 05, 2003 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for more. I dunno about anyone else, but i like your alternative pairings. I do not like it when stories or plain with, as another reader had said the "right pairings" and no other. i prefer alternatives as it is, rather than the norm, but if they jump around, then it's just as good. |
Reviewed By: DarkDeity On: March 05, 2003 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy oh boy !!! onward...! |
Reviewed By: Xellos-sama On: March 05, 2003 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hate that everyone sleeping with the wrong people, but since I've read your fics before, I'm not surprised. The "right" couple ends up together in the end. THEY BETTER!
*Shakes fist jokingly* |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby On: March 05, 2003 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whole lotta good stuff happening this chapter. Wow! |
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: March 04, 2003 21:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I think I swallowed my tongue! Because I can't believe what I just read! Duo and Relena? Heero and Hilde? I'm mad at everyone now. Well, except Noin. She hasn't done anything outragous yet.
Great chapter. |
Reviewed By: Mia On: March 04, 2003 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm scared for life now! How could Relena do that? And with him?! |
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