| "Demonic Shadow" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Demonic shadow
Reviewed By: Daikari4eva On: December 17, 2003 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great idea for a story. It's getting real intersting. If u still need a beta, I'd be more than happy to do it. Please write back if u do, to Gemmarose9@aol.com.
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Reviewed By: Fifi On: August 23, 2003 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great ficcy. However you need to update and update soon. |
Reviewed By: Little_Leila [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 11:50 CST
Comment/Review:
I know itīs not normal to chat with you *I love Yugi and Davis* But who found out?
First: of all the name is *Kisu*
Second: Didnīt you know, that Iorieīs surname is *Hida*?
(Read the comment on the first chapter then you know the pairings. ^^)
And last NO Ken wonīt be with Kisu thatīs for sure. Thatīs to your Questions. But donīt worry the better Questions are:
Who is Dedalos? Who is Dedalosī Master? Will the Kaizer find out about Daisuke and Kisu?
Many Adventures, many riddles and also new friends. So stay tuned for more chapters. ^_~ (Please?) |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 11:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who was the one who found out about Kiso? Will Ken end up falling in luv with Kiso insted of Davis? Plz continue so I can find out. Sorry no ideas |
Reviewed By: Lilly On: January 02, 2003 14:41 CST
Comment/Review:
This is great! Please continue. Does anyone other than Jun know about the demon? I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 05:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U'v done this well so far and ur not going 2 continue!!!! The stories brill. The best Davis fic ever |
