| "Dark Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: holo On: March 05, 2003 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one hell of a good story! Must post more please! |
Reviewed By: radical_edward02 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good and I WANT more to come out. IT ROCKS!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 18:01 CST
Comment/Review:
The problem here is you didn't give us enough information. Why after you beat us over the head with Yugi badassness did he suddenly decide to sacrifice himself? It makes no sense. And what aoubt Yami, does he love Yugi, hate him, does he even care?
And a warning about your next fic, your new character reeks of Mary Sueism. Be VERY careful because I have no problems with ripping Mary Sues a new one.
Besides I'm not interested in the 'new' characters I wanna find out what happend to Yami and Yugi.
Icz |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 16:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Good second chapter! I like the way you portrayed Yuugi! Can't wait for ch. 3! If I find a good song, I'll let you know.
Ja!
Katmon =^.^={AKA Okusama KK} |
Reviewed By: AngelEyes On: January 08, 2003 20:05 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE, TELL ME WHERE THE THING IS!!! :AM VERRRY DESPRET: Please update fic! :) |
Reviewed By: AngelEyes On: January 08, 2003 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic! cept, that site you said had the undubbed version, what lang. is that in????!!!!
e-mail me at artistangel2@juno.com |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 00:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good! I'm kinda hoping for a second ch, but you don't have to do one!!
And, actually, I had a feeling who's POV it was during the 1st ch, but don't let that bother you!! It was still well done, and I agree with Jadesaber, you did handle the suspense really well!! {I can't do that... *sob*}
Ja!
Katmon =^.^= {AKA Okusama KK} |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 09, 2002 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update Reincarnation, and Red Eyes Black Dragon soon.
Angel Muse: Yeah update.
Keora: Please. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: December 09, 2002 14:01 CST
Comment/Review:
This is a really great story! I actually figured out it was Yami during the second paragraph, but I think that you handled the suspense really well. Please post more of this soon! I want to see what happens next! |
