| "Shadows of Cyan" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: wildefyre On: December 31, 2002 22:49 CST
Comment/Review:
This was very different. As I started reading it I was picking up on the little clues you left. Poor Ryo... Poor Shin! My only question is: Did Touma and Seiji ever get together or is Touma still with Ryo?
Keep up the great work... Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Wildefyre [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 00:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I love how you twist and turn events so that we are kept guessing as to what is going to happen next. You know me I'm a Seiji/Touma fan so I want to see them together! ^_^
It will be interesting to see what Shin does now and more importantly how Ryo will win Shin's heart back. Keep up the great work! I love this ficcie! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Destiny's Lot On: December 10, 2002 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, very deep at times. I really want to know what's going to happen. You seem to be a writer who enjoys making us believe one thing and then you ripe it apart a minute later. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter. |
