| "Hot Days" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Uchi no Bakura to Ryou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2004 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
teehee this is very funny so far...! ^_^ so your friend's lemon notebook was read by the principal? *shudders in horror* ohmygosh! Hayashibe-chan is very scared for her! poor MC-san! *^^* it's still incredibly funny.....update soon, please? heh.....
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 05, 2004 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaze continue!!!!!
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Title: sequel!
Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: October 20, 2003 07:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
This screams for sequel! SEQUEL!! CONTINUE please!!
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 09:16 CST
Comment/Review:
PP- That happened to me. I got grounded but my mom foregot. I'm the Baby so I got off easy!!!! I love this story!! Up date already... |
Reviewed By: Moosenogger On: February 10, 2003 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!! COME ON!!! I've been waiting FOREVER for this story to get to the good part! Grrr... anyway, I feel VERY sorry for MP. I drew a lemony pic in my sketchbook and if my mother ever found it...let's just say I'd be in deep shiot. |
Reviewed By: Ranma Higurashi On: December 23, 2002 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!NOW!!!!!!!!NOW SAYS I!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Dark Lady Setsuna On: December 19, 2002 18:40 CST
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 08:39 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* My bakura wears heart boxers? CCCCCCCUUUUUUUTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!
*Hikari~Aibou~YamiPP* CCCCCUUUUUTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEE!
*YamiBakura* /blushes redder than his boxers/ |
Reviewed By: loanshark On: December 13, 2002 21:07 CST
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this is great! *grinz* haha, please update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Shaina Carney On: December 11, 2002 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me love it and i can't wait for more. I write one fanfiction.net if you want to read my work.
I'm Angel Wolf. |
