| "At Yugi's Place" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Whoa..
Reviewed By: Jorep On: March 17, 2004 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was...awful, yet funny. But seriously, underage people should not be writing porn. Learn some bloody spelling, kid.
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Reviewed By: Neonius On: March 17, 2004 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your grammar and spelling are incredibly awful. You type like an illegal immigrant friend of mine speaks. And from the descriptions, i'm guessing that you're still a virgin - And that's ok, but you should atleast watch some porn to get an example of a naked chick. And the creativity of the story was just fucked up. HE TRIPPED ON HER SHOES FOR FUCK'S SAKE!! I mean, WHAT THE HELL!?! Anyways, it was funny as hell though. Keep up the sexual-comedy fic's.
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Reviewed By: chaos mage On: November 30, 2003 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
for the love of god man i know you can do beter than that it totally sucked!!
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Reviewed By: ROhan On: April 14, 2003 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fan fic i read the other ones nice. =] |
Reviewed By: Tramp [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 12:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Over all, not bad. You need to seriously work on spelling and grammar though. You misspelled too many key words and your use of tenses is off. Use your spell checker or have someone proofread your work before submitting it. It'll help a great deal. |
Reviewed By: nik nak On: December 10, 2002 15:38 CST
Comment/Review:
hey i think the story was good its just.. u have lots of grammatical errors, did your computer not pick it up? Also some words were used incorrectly i mean, sitted... is that a word? |
