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Reviewed By: sillydragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 23:52 CST
Comment/Review:
you littel...grrr!!!! you stole my title!!
'sigh'
sorry. i guess you didn't steal the title from me. but i've been writting this one storie that, i think, is really good and it has the same title so i guess i can't submit it here or at least i have to change to title. sorry for yelling. |
Reviewed By: JasonC On: January 14, 2003 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How long before the senshi rebel against Luna and Keiko? You can only push people so far. They are only with her due to loyalty to Queen Serenity, but that won't last under this abuse. Ami appears about ready to snap as do the others. What is Queeny going to say to this? An arguement between Usa and Serenity is in the near future over Keiko's behavior especially on how she has abandoned her daughter. Well I guess like mother like daughter after all Serenity abandoned Usagi so we all know where Keiko gets it. That would be funny to have thrown in Serenitys face. Will Chibi Usa come back? If she does will she be a different version? Trunks and Usa's daughter or will Mamoru force himself on her? Could that be what Keiko and Mamoru have planned for Usagi or are they going to kill her? I hope that they realize if they even try the senshi will kill them at least the outers will. More chapters soon.
JasonC |
Reviewed By: silent_angel On: January 09, 2003 09:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, this is one hell of a story, plz continue it, it seriously rocks!!!!! PLZZZZZZ CONTINUE!!!!
cya luv Dani Clifton |
Reviewed By: JasonC On: January 06, 2003 01:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have her have some money already saved up to get her own place or hae her parents help her out. she could convince them by saying that she needs this to become more responsible. She could get a job and not tell Keiko, Mamoru and Luna where she lived. If she moved in with the Inners that could cause trouble for them. THe bastard tri are going to be angry that she will no longer be under their control as is. I still think that some true pain should come the the bitch queen serenity for her behavior. I bet that the inners would revolt if Usagi did as well as the outers that should show Serenity what her daughter is really like. I can't wait until Usagi hears the whole story for what she does to her mother. The bitch must pay for her pride and selfishness. |
Reviewed By: ills [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 22:14 CST
Comment/Review:
-thumbs up- |
Reviewed By: ills [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 04:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am so happy that you contiune.. damn that girl is a bitch. She, dariend and luna need to be shot |
Reviewed By: JasonC On: January 05, 2003 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the fic but Serenity needs a wakeup call. How can she treat her daughter like that and give excuses for the brat when her only worthwhile daughter is made to suffer. The elder daughter is a spoiled brat and yet Serenity refuses to see that. Beryl should trian Usagi up and when she goes back convince her to kill her sister by telling her all that serenity has said about her preference for her older daughter. Usagi has proven herself her sister hasn't except that she is trash. Usagi and trunks should kill both Mamoru and whats her name and for queen serenity to watch so that hse may suffer. She deserves to suffer for all eternity. Same goes for the bitch, Luna and Tux-boy. |
Reviewed By: ills [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man usagi's sister was a bitch, anywho i loved it, sad ending but i loved it anyway...i wish that you would write a sequal.. Your a good writer btw! |
Reviewed By: Mic Mic On: January 02, 2003 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I completely loved it. I really liked the part when their tails were stuck together and when Usa was killed that was so sad. Beryl was right to kill Queen Serenity. Well I wanna read the next chappie I like this story. Please keep updating.
See Ya!
^_~
Mic Mic |
Reviewed By: adb [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! It's the first one to paint Berly in a good light. I could see a queen out for justice after her daughter was wrongfully killed. I love it. |
Reviewed By: Raven Star [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 03:59 CST
Comment/Review:
You have to continue this |
Reviewed By: Serena On: May 11, 2003 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was excellent!!! Pease keep writing and keep up the good work. |
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