| "The worst... and best day of Hida Iori's life." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: djmunky [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
No offense, but the idea of a nine year old being able to ejaculate is a bit...squickity. It would have been more in my comfort zone if you had, err, "aged them up".
Although, I gotta give you major bonus points for not bashing/bastardizing/feminizing Iori-kun. Please dun shoot me! ::runs and hides:: |
Reviewed By: Your Kitty On: February 21, 2003 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Koi-chan I like it. it's a lot better then something I'd write...I'd never get it to work just right...well I guess it's good you wrote it and not me then ^.~ |
Reviewed By: The Infamous Boss Reo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great piece. Keep up the spectacular writing. :) |
