| "Shatterglass" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nao On: December 19, 2002 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay girl... gimme me more.... this was getting funny towards chapter 5 or 6 about sex-ed... I would like to know what is going to happen... come on tell me tell me!!!! Poor Heero.. I just want to hold him and make him cry....:( I don't know how many reviews you need now.. but this is one more then what you had....:D |
Reviewed By: Medea Dracena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 04:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Yanno, I'm starting to feel real special. You ask for 23 rviews, I was your 23rd reviewer. You ask for 29 reviews, I'm your 29th reviewer. I should get some sort of award for being so lucky.
ANYWAY! ^.^ That chapter was much lighter than the rest of the story. Shorter, but that's ok because you're providing us with a lemon next chapter *dances around*
But poor Heero. Not knowing anything about sex. Or babies even. But he'll find out soon. If not the babies part by hands-on experience then definately the sex part!
*skips of singing* 2x1 lemon! 2x1 lemon!
Ja ne!
Medz-chan =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Skye On: December 17, 2002 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still like it, but there were a lot of spelling mistakes at the beginning of one of the recent chapters that ruined its flow. Please continue posting quickly. |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: December 17, 2002 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i quite like this |
Reviewed By: Medea Dracena [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 15:57 CST
Comment/Review:
WAH! I come back from my parent-imposed exile from the net and there's three new chapters of this wonderful story to greet me! You said you needed 23 reviews to get chapter 7, so here I am! The 23rd reviewer! And if I'm not, then I was when I started writing this ^.^;
The end of chapter 6 was my favourite, the very last line about Duo saying how he was going to try and make Heero fall in love with him. So dramatic and... well, depressing comes to mind as well. But I still love it and I love your writing style. A few typos here and there but it's very polished.
See! See! I reviewed! Now what about capter 7 =3
Ja ne!
Medz-chan =^.^= |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 13:21 CST
Comment/Review:
That's a little excesive of Duo isn't it? Trying to get heero to fall in love with him. oh well great chapter and the one before it. I can't wait until you update again I hope it's soon! |
Reviewed By: Skye On: December 17, 2002 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still like it, but you've slowed down the posting process. What will Hiiro do? |
Reviewed By: Lady Darkness On: December 17, 2002 08:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huge Cliffhanger! Will Duo get Heero to be able to love him? He has to please I am a big fan of 2x1! Please be really nice again and post more than one chapter! I will totally love you if you do that! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post more of this really good story soon. *gives you Heero death glare* If you don't I will have to hack into Mediaminer and find where you live and come and kill you. (I can't do that but it is funny to say) Anyways those muses or muse or yours could do a bit more editing. I enjoyed the fic a whole bunch though and I hope you post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Lady Darkness On: December 17, 2002 07:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay the story is a huge cliffhanger and i am going to go nuts trying to think of the stuff you could be doing to this fic. WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!*gives you Heero's death glare* NOW! You've gotta post more soon I am going crazy! Anyways the story is very well put together and the plot is very well formed. I think your muses need to do a bit more editing though but otherwise...GREAT FIC! |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waiii. A cliff hanger???? How mean. I really wanna know whats gonna happen next. I love this story and I can't wait till you update it again. Please update again soon. I really love this story........I think I just repeated myself. Oh Well. You have an exellent writting ability and the story is sooo amazing. 2X1 foreva. Ja ne!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Azrael1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! that was absolutely amazing, I am hooked here, so you have to continue soon...please *gives Quatre puppy dog pout* Please please please hurry up and post the next chapter, I will do anything....how about...umm....I could write you a story maybe, or I could bake you a cake that says 2x1 forever! well that is all, and hurry up, the suspence is killing me here! |
Reviewed By: Skye On: December 15, 2002 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again. Again, this is good. Please hurry up with the posting. I want to know how Duo resolves this. |
Reviewed By: Kithren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 16:02 CST
Comment/Review:
You love being sadistic don’t you?
Now come on people Review! Even if you reviewed already, review again! PLEASE!! I mean, the faster she gets five reviews per chapter the faster she’ll post the next! Right? So review please!
And I agree with Terrasa, Doctor J is stupid! |
Reviewed By: Terrasa On: December 13, 2002 14:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Thank you for the long chappy! Though, I have to admit I am not really a fan of fast confessions. Maybe... Duo telling Heero that he loved him was fine, but kissing him right after didn't seem to be that realistic. You did a good job though, very intense and I can't wait for the rest!!!!!!! ^.^
stupid J, stupid J |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 10:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Nooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! Not Heero how could you! He can't die nonononononononononononononononono!!!!!
Pleaseeeeeeeeeee fix this! Heer0 can't die! and upodate soon! |
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