"Just Let Me" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Evelyn On: December 21, 2003 22:52 CST Comment/Review: Hey, this is good stuff you're writing keep it up and update real soon.
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Reviewed By: CherubKatan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 07:37 CST Comment/Review: Farfie: This hurts GOD!
Rach:.... *sweat drops* he just had to show up... ne gooood good short but good ^_^ finish it kamichan or else i'm going to.... shave yohji's hair again! *smirks* |
Reviewed By: CherubKatan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 06:45 CST Comment/Review: *hands her a slice of chocolate cake* MWAHAHAHA PAYBACKS ARE HELL AREN'T THEY! erm *coughs* sorry for that... good chapter.. and i'm glad that whore is dead no one takes kenken away from ran except for you then i get ran ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Steph On: December 23, 2002 22:27 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: why did u make Ken w/ a girl? he better go back and stay w/ ran. But other than the random girl... it's good^^. |
Reviewed By: Angora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 20:28 CST Comment/Review: This is sooo kick ass awesome!! I hope you can post more soon!! XD Your ficcy is one of my faves ever!! X3 You're doing a really great job! ^~ |
Reviewed By: Kahr On: December 17, 2002 12:20 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This was the best AxK fic i have read!! You have to keep writing more. Chapter 3 was the best!! Lates!! |
Reviewed By: CherubKatan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 07:24 CST Comment/Review: *looks up with chibi eyes at kami* can i pwease have the video tape of all that... lol anyway nice second chapter ^_^ *pokes her* more!
Rach =P |
Reviewed By: Hope On: December 14, 2002 23:20 CST Comment/Review: The story looks interesting. Contintue, please! |
Reviewed By: madame_knight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 20:17 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This has been great! I am really looking forward to more. I can't wait until you really get them together!! Please post more soon!!
Chapter 2 did seem rushed. One was excellent. Two was good though, the near lemon was hot and makes one want more! More!! :-) |
Reviewed By: Koyasu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 14:37 CST Comment/Review: Loving this so far! I can't wait to read more! Here's hoping that Ken finds some stablility, and finds comfort in makingt wild, passionate love to his dear uke, Ran. hehe |
Reviewed By: CherubKatan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 07:37 CST Comment/Review: Kami-chan! psycho kens are FUN kens! *looks around* good story ^__^ i like it. i want to see more of it |
Reviewed By: Angora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 19:59 CST Comment/Review: Please continue!! *big puppy eyes* Your story is soo RanKen angsty great!! *________* |
Reviewed By: ember_fang On: December 12, 2002 19:30 CST Comment/Review: YEAH!! GREAT STORY!! Continue!! ^_^ RanKen stories are soooo hard to find around this place!! |