| "Pure Providence" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: lil tenshi On: January 10, 2003 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha interesting...but mek it longer cuz i wanna read more! lol newhoz i think that ree n piccolo hav sumthin goin on thea heh heh ;) lol newhoz i'll ttyl on msn! buhbye!
lil tenshi |
Reviewed By: LiL TeNsHi hehe On: December 29, 2002 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo pretty sad...tha prolouge part...poor Ree...newho ish kinduh interestin! continueeee |
Reviewed By: Lune On: December 29, 2002 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa buddy! I like this one!
It makes sense totally like!
=)
The story doesn't go on some bogus trip and stays inside the story line.
wonderful job! |
Reviewed By: Lizzy On: December 16, 2002 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm . . . i don't think i've ever rated one of your fanfics before, except for the ones you let me read last year. i have to say that i like this one so far, though. very, very nice that their is finally a girl who may potentially kick butt. and like the other guy said, i wanna see more battles in the future!! |
Reviewed By: Cleric_The_Mad On: December 13, 2002 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it was definally creative though due to its only one chapter so far all we see is a little blurb that had a quick battle. Hope to see more indepth battles in the chapters to come he he.
Cleric_The_Mad
a.k.a
Menchi |
