| "A Desert of Sweet Love" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: WannabeWriter
Reviewed By: Lyris [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Umm I just wanted you to know that I think this is a pretty good story I hope you write more fanfiction. By the way it's dessert with two 's' not one.
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Reviewed By: cateye91 On: September 09, 2005 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...well...i'm set for 2day and maybe 2morrow 2...lol...*sigh* i'm such a hentai...o well, u can't say nothin since ur the one who wrote this perfect lemon...r u sure it was ur first yaoi? seemed like u've been doin it for a while...lol...yugi/yami, great pairing...u should write another...^_^
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Reviewed By: darkmageliz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chocolate syrup and Yami/Yuugi sex...=3 can't get any better than that...xD
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Reviewed By: Keua On: March 22, 2004 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute!! ^^ i really enjoyed it although there was a little bit too much talking... get to the good stuff sooner:p the grammar was a bit off cuz you have to start a new paragraph every time someone speaks (weird ne?) nice job, keep writing! =]
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: December 30, 2003 02:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooooooooooo kawaii. great job on ur first lemon.
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Reviewed By: yami's slave^_~ On: November 09, 2003 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a really good story!!! i love y/yy pairings they are the best and yami is so sexy and loving twords yugi they are just a bunch of cuties^_^ well i liked it alot and i wish that you could do one with them in it again.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW Not bad! Very sweet! Everyone who watches the series can see subtle shonen ai hint between those two! And FANTASTIC FOR UR 1st LEMON!!!!! |
Reviewed By: nobody On: February 08, 2003 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why did they use a condom they didn't need one and he still got in on when he went to sleep. but other than that the story was good |
Reviewed By: ashleystarfighter [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
why did they use a condom??? |
Reviewed By: KisaandherDuoplushie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 23:16 CST
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That was your first? I must say you've dun good! The Y/Y coupling is a bit worn out tho' I like Seto/Yami better but it's still a cool fic! I wonder if a chocolate covered Yugi really does taste that good? ^_~ Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
s-s-sugoi!!! ur first lemon?! that was really good, its so sweet... this is one of my first yugi-oh lemons, i mostly read digimon and evanglion. i think ill read more now though... i hope u write more, i love this couple. so kawaii! |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 07:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this one a lot...Yami is such a patient and gentle lover.....always concerned for his little hikari......great story!!! |
Reviewed By: Iczer6@aol.com On: December 12, 2002 20:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Awww... Good mix of cuteness and sexiness. I have a weakness for the first time fics. This one left me with a nice warm fuzzy feeling...
Icz |
