| "Teenage Hormone's" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trunks girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fanfic one of the best! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 05:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Kind of obvious you weren't enjoying it at the end... the "I'm glad we waited" bit was terribly artificial and forced. I kept thinking "they should have kept the relationship a secret, at least then they could fuck!" I'm.... not a big proponent of the abstinence campaign. Sure, wait 'till you're ready, but your age is just a number & doesn't factor in your maturity or the nature of your relationship... If you wait, you should wait for YOUR reasons; it's just hollow if you have parents watching you like a hawk and dire consequences hanging over your head. Many teenagers have rushed into sex just BECAUSE it was forbidden by their parents... B & CC only made a tense situation worse IMHO.
Anyway that's my soapbox. Liked the lemon, even though it was kinda rushed. |
Reviewed By: animekid On: March 03, 2003 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first read this on ff.net, and I decided to finish reading this story here! I mean, what the hey. Even though you didn't enjoy it, I thought it was ok ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ashia is cool On: February 04, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmoooooooorrrreeeeeeeeee |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh write more !!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story! plz write more!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: SuperSaiyanGirl On: January 03, 2003 20:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Really, it's soft, diffeent and very, very touching.
I really enjoy your writting and please, continue the great job. |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have nothing to say but great story i am nothing but a shadow to this world and this world is nothing but a shadow to me so run if i must but i can never hide darend by my path of mischuf i say good bye ** run's off into the night** |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is good so far |
Reviewed By: Roshy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 11:49 CST
Comment/Review:
kwool, me likes your fic a lot. but could you please have a lemon?! please? anyways, your fic is great! -luv Roshy- |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wright more already now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 16:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Awwww.... so cute... ^_^ and funny too. Hee hee hee... stupid reporters got what was coming to them... U need to continue |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2002 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it nead's some click click mute xxx |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 21:09 CST
Comment/Review:
it nead some sex no efence |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it thumbs up ;) |
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