| "I Wanna Be With You" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
personally, i found the whole fic hillarious. and best/worst of all, i wouldnt put it past daisuke to really be that big of a baka. its a really really really cute fic u got here.the lemon is... much better than the other one that ive reviewed. i agree about the regurgitating thing in the other review though, i dont think taichi can dothat at will? 'He then kissed Daisuke full on the lips, sharing the cum in his mouth with its maker' or something seems less.. gross? iiiii dunno.i love the ending with takeru though. |
Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
personally, i found the whole fic hillarious. and best/worst of all, i wouldnt put it past daisuke to really be that big of a baka. its a really really really cute fic u got here.the lemon is... much better than the other one that ive reviewed. i agree about the regurgitating thing in the other review though, i dont think taichi can dothat at will? 'He then kissed Daisuke full on the lips, sharing the cum in his mouth with its maker' or something seems less.. gross? iiiii dunno.i love the ending with takeru though.
chara |
Reviewed By: Bulbasaur [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, it seemed kind of rushed. And using the word "regurgitate" in a lemon just...kills the mood. |
Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: December 15, 2002 22:29 CST
Comment/Review:
This fic is Great! I went to a sequal to this fanfiction. |
Reviewed By: TogetherAgain [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 08:56 CST
Comment/Review:
yet another great fic done by you! I love it! later |
