Reviewed By: Inuchi On: August 02, 2003 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
write more please! i want to know what happens next! and also your writing in this is not horrible. in fact with the right touches here there you could have people on the edge of there seat, or a have chill run down there spine, or have the hair on the back of their neck stand on end,or...oops! got caried away! but please please update soon! |
