| "To Love You Before Him" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it a lot, but I don't think it entirely counts as non-yaoi. ^-^ I liked how you wrote Tea, and that last little thing about her wishing she was the one he loved. I think everyone can relate to that.
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: January 23, 2004 13:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Let's see the best thing about your fic: 1- No Anzu bashing. I've read some of your other fics! You are a great author! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Ro A. M. On: July 19, 2003 17:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ro: blink, eye twitch, double blink, blink, eye twitch...
Sa: groans. Great, now you've got her started. I'm never going to be able to translate!
Ro: ...blink, pause, glare.
Sa: Well, we don't really read het, in fact, we never read het lemons, but we made an exception here.
Ro: Anzu, the perve! My god, she actually has those things! That's just sick!
Sa: but only in the fic! She doesn't really have those things.
Ro A. M.'s overall reaction: What's Yugi doing going to Anzu asking her to tell him about sex? Wouldn't he want his lover (well soon-to-be one anyway) to teach him that? So they could go through it together? Or was he feeling cowed by the amount of expierence Yami had and figured that since Anzu had lived less amount of years she's had less? Or something like that?
Sa D. D.'s overall reaction: Need I add anything? Except that I second Cody Thomas's challenge, what Ro said is what I think as well.
Cya!
Ro A. M
Sa D. D. |
Reviewed By: Pluie On: March 01, 2003 00:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...I'm not much into the whole Yami Yugi/Yugi thing...seeings how it's physically impossible...but I'm very pleased with how you pulled this fic off...and you didn't even bash Anzu! Finally! This is what I like to see! Yaoi fics that don't bash poor Anzu. Congradts! |
Reviewed By: K.A. Maples [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 03:26 CST
Comment/Review:
By the way, good job. |
Reviewed By: K.A. Maples [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 03:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Muwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaha! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: January 01, 2003 15:33 CST
Comment/Review:
If Yugi really loves Yami he would not under any circumstances have slept with TEA!!!!!!!! No matter how unsure he was he would have had Yami kindly and gently explain and demonstrate how it is done. Therefore I issue this challenge since the damage with Tea has already been done. I challenge you to continue this story where Yugi shows off his new found eperience with Yami and Yami somehow doesn't find out that it isn't Yugi's first time, but Yugi then feels guilty. Damn you Tea! Damn you for defiling Yugi! But I still love you Miko and will continue to read your work, just no more Het ok? |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: January 01, 2003 15:31 CST
Comment/Review:
If Yugi really loves Yami he would not under any circumstances have slept with TEA!!!!!!!! No matter how unsure he was he would have had Yami kindly and gently explain and demonstrate how it is done. Therefore I issue this challenge since the damage with Tea has already been done. I challenge you to continue this story where Yugi shows off his new found eperience with Yami and Yami somehow doesn't find out that it isn't Yugi's first time, but Yugi then feels guilty. Damn you Tea! Damn you for defiling Yugi! But I still love you Miko and will continue to read your work, just no more Het ok? |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 03:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm with Sen on this one. I don't really read het, if I can get around it. This was okay, though, for a het ficcy by a yaoi author. I probably couldn't have done half as well!!
Ja!
Katmon =^.^= {AKA Okusama KK} |
Reviewed By: Icz On: December 15, 2002 22:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm... While not the biggest YugixTea/Anzu fan I'm also not a basher either. You managed to take a aituation that would have me running for the hills and make a surprisingly moving fic out of it.
Any chance for a yaoi lemony sequel?
Icz |
Reviewed By: Sen On: December 15, 2002 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
...odd. But kinda cute, and very original. I liked it, and I don't even read het. ^_^;; |
