| "The Blabity Blab that Screwed Up AGAIN!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Tyler Durden2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 10:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really feel sorry for this story and it's author. More description needed so the fic makes sense. A plot needed so the fic isn't pointless. Characterisation needed so it feels realistic. I'm so tired of lazy, pointless fan fics like this that I can't be bothered to write any more criticism. Just put a little effort in to it next time. In fact this review is just a copy of the last one I wrote. That's how tired I am of these half-assed fics.
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Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 02:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Katmon: Hehehehe... Very funny, yes?
Seiji: I'm bored...
Katmon: Mai's idea...
Seiji: It was great! Really, it was!!!
Katmon: Ahhhh... The life of luxury... Yami Malik! Get me more chocolate!
YM: Yes'm...
Katmon: Heh... Black mail...
Ja! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam On: December 20, 2002 04:56 CST
Comment/Review:
*screech* DAMN IT!!!!! I COULDN'T MAKE IT TO BE DA FIRST REVIEWER!!!!!
YGO: YYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!
Ah well... let's try the second review song.
*sing song* I'M A SECOND REVIEWER I'M...# Ah it's just not da same. |
Reviewed By: CeciliaDiaz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 15:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Having fun with you're fic. Well, its good and funny. Now if you could just get it to work right. Is Barney getting wine from Pegasus?
I hate you,
You hate me.
We'll chase Barney up a tree.
With a .22 shotgun,
And shoot him in the head.
And we'll be glad that Barney's dead.
Write more funnyness. |
