| "The Princes and the Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rapunzel On: August 04, 2005 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY ITS NEARLY BEEN A YEAR!!! WRTIE MORE, UPDATE IT SOON PLEASE!!! I want to know about Syaoran and Sakura, and the rest!!! PLEASE, PLEASE AND MORE PLEASE!!! Thanks for a great read so far!!! Bye, MzEvilBlossoms, (aka Rapunzel) xxx
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Reviewed By: forever_lost On: August 27, 2004 12:05 CDT
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the story is pretty good but the grammer and spelling can get you confused and i don't really think you need to write both point of views all the time cuz you're just retelling the same thing over again when you could be...expanding the plot!
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Reviewed By: takeruHikari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This story is great please I'm begging ya! Continue he story. Anyway the plot is ecellent. Only thing you have to worry about the grammer.Thanks for writting.
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Reviewed By: AkitoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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MOOOOOOOOOOORE I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOORE CANT GET ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay sry about that...that was my frend. we just loooove your story and we would like more of it pleez? pretty pleez?
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Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: LilSana On: July 24, 2004 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!! UPDATE FAST AS U CAN!!!!!!!!! PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZ!!! CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE BEST SAKURA FANFIC EVA READ!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ABSOLUTLY LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: marcy On: July 23, 2004 22:08 CDT
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hey umm can you please update as soon as posible i really want to read the next chapter preatty please .
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Title: takeruHikari
Reviewed By: takeruHikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue with the story it's soooooooooooo good .Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: htebazile On: July 14, 2004 14:57 CDT
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hey great story you have to write more soon i really enjoy this one. you kinda have to watch the spelling it was very confusing. lol.
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Reviewed By: marcy On: June 21, 2004 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon i really want 2 read more of u story
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Title: update,update,update...
Reviewed By: insanecherry On: January 20, 2004 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
was up tis is sofie/triple s,man i'm afruit sometimes because i kepp on 4getting 2 R&R. i read tis about a mouth and a half ago.any i was saying tat i totally luv ur story so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz... update and finish tis story soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooon... i'll be waiting and so wod the other readers. bye 4 now i gotta go. update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,updat e,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,upd ate,update,update,update,update,update,upupdate,date,update,update,update,u pdate,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update ************************t2l***********************
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Reviewed By: ShadowBlozzbom On: January 15, 2004 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love any fic that has sakura as a princesess. also i hope you continue
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Reviewed By: update On: September 20, 2003 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue to write. Your fict is very well done so far. |
Reviewed By: Artemis_Of_DarkMoon On: September 19, 2003 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got a good thing going here. But you need to slow down on your writeing cause you mess up more than you should.But outher than that your great! keep it up and dont for get to slow down. |
Reviewed By: ssjbookgirl On: September 11, 2003 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic was funny. you put a new twist to the characters. the story line was grate. you kept me intertained and you kept me guessing. i cant wate for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Ekimozo (Too lazy to sign in) On: September 11, 2003 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the heck does it mean? Tell us in the next chappie - I bet something BIG is going to happen! It looks like Syaoran's devensive shield is very very slowly breaking away - how KAWAII! |
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