| "The Princes and the Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: demonic_jedi_master [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i really like this story especially because Sakura's not a shy little girl bearly learning to defend herself.
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Reviewed By: Lina A Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 17:43 CDT
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I'm sorry, but it seems that the story is a bit chopped up and moving fast. I like your idea though. You have a very creative mind, but I think you need a little bit more detail and take your time. You probaly have reasons, and I understand. I just wanted to let you know what I thought of your story. Keep up the good work. Until next time, Ja! ~Rose-san
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Reviewed By: kitty_tsubasa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 19:57 CDT
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this is greeeeeeeeeat update update update ^^
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 17:45 CST
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*crying* Oh that was soo beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!
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Title: KAWAII!
Reviewed By: Teesha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 16:10 CST
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How cuuuuuuute! You must update. Where you get your ideas i have no clue. but your story stays original and is soooooo cool!!!! You must update! You rock!
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Reviewed By: 23kags23 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing i always look 4 storys that sound really good but yours is great do not stop plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: MzEvilBlossoms [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 06:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Well done! I *STILL* love your story!!! Its so cute... and I had a sudden thought... is the little boy Syaoran??? I bet so! How could it not be? *Star eyed* *_* ^^ Anyway, keep it up! You are doing *GREAT* so far! I think this is a awesome story! And PLEASE do put more of the S+S relationship! Its so KAWAII!!! ^_^ PLEASE UPDATE REAL SOON!!! ^^ Love, MzEvilBlossoms xxx ^^
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Reviewed By: CardcaptorFans [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was VERY good. Please update!!!!
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Reviewed By: 4cherryblossoms [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 00:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's really good!!!!! update pls!!!! please please please please update update update update update!!!!!!!!!!! i just noticed that sometimes your spelling on the character names are wrong so it's Syaoran not Sayron and Eriol not Eroil. that's all!!! please update update update update update please please please please!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fanking On: September 05, 2005 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is soooooo cute! wonder what happens next. dont dissapoint me ok! i luv it so far. looking 4ward 2 more! bye.
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Title: Thank you... ^_^
Reviewed By: MzEvilBlossoms [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR DEDICATING THAT LOVLEY CHAPTER TO ME!!!! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ I really am happy that you did update your story... I still have to update my own =P (It's called I'll Never Forget You...) But anyway, I think your story is going GREAT so far and I would LOVE to read so much more! Please finish your story! I think it is COMPLETELY worth it! Well done! And do KEEP IT UP!!! Write MORE soon please! From your no. 1!!! Bye, MzEvilBlossoms xxx ^_^ P.S. A kiss from Syaoran would be great too! Lol! Kawaii... ^_^
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Title: Victoria
Reviewed By: Princess Blossem On: August 18, 2005 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an execellent fan fic i loved every bit of it and i cant wait till the other chapters come i am waiting for the other chapters, your story is brilliant. i wish u the best of luck for your other chapters ill be back to write a review about them.
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Reviewed By: Rapunzel On: August 04, 2005 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY ITS NEARLY BEEN A YEAR!!! WRTIE MORE, UPDATE IT SOON PLEASE!!! I want to know about Syaoran and Sakura, and the rest!!! PLEASE, PLEASE AND MORE PLEASE!!! Thanks for a great read so far!!! Bye, MzEvilBlossoms, (aka Rapunzel) xxx
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Reviewed By: forever_lost On: August 27, 2004 12:05 CDT
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the story is pretty good but the grammer and spelling can get you confused and i don't really think you need to write both point of views all the time cuz you're just retelling the same thing over again when you could be...expanding the plot!
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Reviewed By: takeruHikari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is great please I'm begging ya! Continue he story. Anyway the plot is ecellent. Only thing you have to worry about the grammer.Thanks for writting.
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Reviewed By: AkitoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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MOOOOOOOOOOORE I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOORE CANT GET ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay sry about that...that was my frend. we just loooove your story and we would like more of it pleez? pretty pleez?
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Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: LilSana On: July 24, 2004 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!! UPDATE FAST AS U CAN!!!!!!!!! PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLZ!!! CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE BEST SAKURA FANFIC EVA READ!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ABSOLUTLY LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: marcy On: July 23, 2004 22:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey umm can you please update as soon as posible i really want to read the next chapter preatty please .
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Title: takeruHikari
Reviewed By: takeruHikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue with the story it's soooooooooooo good .Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: htebazile On: July 14, 2004 14:57 CDT
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hey great story you have to write more soon i really enjoy this one. you kinda have to watch the spelling it was very confusing. lol.
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Reviewed By: marcy On: June 21, 2004 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon i really want 2 read more of u story
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Title: update,update,update...
Reviewed By: insanecherry On: January 20, 2004 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
was up tis is sofie/triple s,man i'm afruit sometimes because i kepp on 4getting 2 R&R. i read tis about a mouth and a half ago.any i was saying tat i totally luv ur story so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz... update and finish tis story soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooon... i'll be waiting and so wod the other readers. bye 4 now i gotta go. update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,updat e,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,upd ate,update,update,update,update,update,upupdate,date,update,update,update,u pdate,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update,update ************************t2l***********************
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Reviewed By: ShadowBlozzbom On: January 15, 2004 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love any fic that has sakura as a princesess. also i hope you continue
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Reviewed By: update On: September 20, 2003 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue to write. Your fict is very well done so far. |
Reviewed By: Artemis_Of_DarkMoon On: September 19, 2003 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got a good thing going here. But you need to slow down on your writeing cause you mess up more than you should.But outher than that your great! keep it up and dont for get to slow down. |
Reviewed By: ssjbookgirl On: September 11, 2003 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic was funny. you put a new twist to the characters. the story line was grate. you kept me intertained and you kept me guessing. i cant wate for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Ekimozo (Too lazy to sign in) On: September 11, 2003 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the heck does it mean? Tell us in the next chappie - I bet something BIG is going to happen! It looks like Syaoran's devensive shield is very very slowly breaking away - how KAWAII! |
Reviewed By: Ekimozo On: July 29, 2003 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Write More!!! That Was The Best!!! Syoran, Tomoyo, Sakura...Write Tons!!!! |
Reviewed By: carmela On: July 28, 2003 13:45 CDT
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Great story can't wait for the update! Please update soon I'm dying to know what happens next!!! |
Reviewed By: Little Wolf Blossom [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 18:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your reviews!!! i want more!!! get friends 2 read or sumethin.... pls!!!! i love readers |
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