| "All you need is love" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: All you need is love
Reviewed By: mlf On: November 08, 2004 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cute story of vegeta and bulma.i liked the ending...write more soon...maria
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Reviewed By: TRUNKS' LIL BITCH On: July 08, 2003 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD STORY IT WAS REALLY CUTE THE CHAPTER ON GOKUS PARTY WAS FUNNY I REALLY LIKE THE END KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK^_^ |
Reviewed By: hehe On: February 12, 2003 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was such a good story! Loved the ending with Vegeta's parents! Only thing that i can think of that could have been different was more info on Vegeta beating up Yamcha! But soooo Good!Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 17:58 CST
Comment/Review:
*smiles, happy tears in her eyes*
that was very good :) ya know, yer the first author to make me teary... heh, go u |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 17:57 CST
Comment/Review:
*smiles, happy tears in her eyes*
that was very good :) ya know, yer the first author to make my teary... heh, go u |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a great ending! awww...if i could feel things i would cry...oh well fuck that! i liked the part when vegeta dropped his towel an you put [drools] i laughed. but seriously anyonw would drool at that! damn! mmm...**sings* break me off a piece of that...*stops and looks behind her* bulma: that enough of that! *bulma wacks her on the head with chichi's fyring pan -end of review |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It's sweet, without being too sweet, putting in a little bitterness as well. Also, good ending. |
Reviewed By: nikeie On: January 08, 2003 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay then... it wuz ok i guess. vampiregoddess, ur 1 cra-z person.. lol |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 03:04 CST
Comment/Review:
lol whooooo nice lemon and great way to end it. write more fics ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Editor Rascal On: January 07, 2003 14:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Edivendtly, I can't spell my own name! I must now point that out to myself and the rest of the world! I clicked that send button a little too quickly! I didn't inspect my comment closely enough to see my mistake!!! Bad editor! Bad, Bad! |
Reviewed By: Editor Rasca; On: January 07, 2003 14:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story could be more original. I know how hard that is, so don't be offended. Decent spelling and not so many grammar errors make it a bit easier to read than some.
You wrote,
"as he drifted into the peaceful land of wink and nod." It's "The land of Winkin', Blinkin' and Nod".
You also wrote: "Yumcha had shown up, flimsy round his neck and smelling..."
There is no such thing as a "flimsy" the word "flimsy" is an adjective, it describes something as fragile,delicate,frail or one-dimensional, superficial or shallow. I believe the word you were going for was "floozy" meaning "prostitute, camp-follower,
chippy, doxy, harlot, hooker, streetwalker, strumpet, tart, tramp, trollop, wench or whore, yes? |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: January 05, 2003 02:07 CST
Comment/Review:
LMAO hehe drunken Z team is always good for some laughst can't wait for next chappie i hope it's a lemon ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lady Of Silent Star On: January 04, 2003 14:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I must admitt I had my speculations, but this really is a good fic, it has amusment, a little Yamcha bashing, and typical Vegeta and Bulma actions. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next installment
~LOSS |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, that was really good so far but bulma is so damn emotional. BUT damn she can hit the weak spots of guys! go bulma! go bulma!**dances around like a wierdo** |
Reviewed By: Vampkestrel On: December 16, 2002 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice so far keep going ^_^ |
