| "Dinner and Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: pheonix On: January 02, 2003 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a beautiful thing.
i like trunks brain its sexy and sweet
and the story is shor and sweet like someone i know
good job keep it up! |
Reviewed By: frostbite On: December 16, 2002 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww it's soo cute, and a great read. I'm really glad the girl was who it was! You like to keep secrets don't you. Anyway it was a great ready and great one shot. The ending rocked it i was just like the story books! I love i love it i love it ; ) |
