| "Hotaru 1/2" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Story!!
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Reviewed By: zelgadis97 On: October 02, 2003 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say, you've done it again. You managed to take the ideas you've explored in other fan-fics and come up with something new. Liked the descriptions of Castle Saturn and Garibaldi VII. Love the idea of 'fixing' Kuno like that. Really happy you decided to complete it. (I'd been looking at the fanfiction.net site and thinking you'd left it.)
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Reviewed By: Garlic Daemon On: June 28, 2003 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeesh the last chapter was bad you should have left it with 2 chapters. BUt anywasy Awesome fic, good for laughs, a few thrills, stuff like that an over all good fic I do admit, along with the rest of your works. |
Reviewed By: Terryie On: March 20, 2003 08:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ranma learning humility and Hotaru finding love and understanding, and everything turning upsidedown, it couldn't be better. |
Reviewed By: BobCat On: January 07, 2003 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were some fairly major spelling errors, but not enough to interfere with this awesome story. Nice to see that you're breaking into some new ground with the matchups. All in all, wonderful. |
Reviewed By: kridz On: January 02, 2003 09:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice epilogue as it should be.Always have love your work and this is not an exception. |
Reviewed By: Shad the Not-So-Magic Dragon On: January 02, 2003 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work, the only problem I had with it is that it's so short compared to your more epic works such as the Labor cycle and relateds. Ah well.
Anyways, thought I'd take this moment to wish you a Happy New Year as well. |
Reviewed By: wdm On: December 30, 2002 08:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very charming and enjoyable read.
(not for the Akane fans of course :)
Thank you for taking the time to do an epilogue,
it is very much appreciated.
Thanks again,
WDM |
Reviewed By: Nathan "LC"D Bickford On: December 29, 2002 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Any fic that has Bast as a main character is a gooooooooooooooooooood fic. Wonderfully funny. |
Reviewed By: taxzombie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had a blast reading this story. I certainly hope that more will follow.
A good romp! |
Reviewed By: Cyber Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 10:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I know that this is most likely not need but I will do it anyway I hope and pray that ranma will end up with Hotaru they both need each other. I hope I see more of this series so far I like it as much as I liked your retake series and I keep going over that story again and again |
Reviewed By: Sonic On: December 27, 2002 10:20 CST
Comment/Review:
You know, stopping a story, when it starts to get really interesting is a bad habit ;-)
Story is funny thought... pretty please? :-) |
Reviewed By: Frederick_Herrio [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 05:03 CST
Comment/Review:
This looks to be a very good continuation, Gregg. I hope to see more of this in the future. And I hope life's been treating you a lot better these days.
Cheers!
Fred |
Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: December 19, 2002 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well written, as is all of your stuff. Great humor. I especially liked the principal versus the senshi. Please don't have Ranma go back to his old stupid ways. He should realize that this is the best thing that has ever happened to him. |
Reviewed By: WDM On: December 17, 2002 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow talk about growth.
(Inner character growth for Ranma baka course in chapter 2, I won't go into details, not a spoiler type of guy)
I'm really glad you decided to continue with this, it's very good.
I look forward to as much of this story as you can give us.
Thanks,
WDM |
Reviewed By: WDM On: December 17, 2002 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Solid work with an interesting concept.
Now the question is, if Akane (kidnapped) changes due to exposure to Cane, what would happen to Akane
(jr the 10 yr old) and what cumulative effect would it have on our favorite tomboy?
Hmm, a kickass martial artist w/ a penchant for "Uncle Ranma"? .
I look forward to seeing what you do with this, very nice start. |
Reviewed By: NekoRanma On: December 17, 2002 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Couldn't stop reading till the end, a new twise on an ongoing theme.I really enjoied reading it and hope to see more of it soon. |
Reviewed By: dunkleself [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 05:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this, I found a few of the scenes very humorous. I could not stop reading this even if I wanted to (which I didn't).
I really would like to see this fanfic continued :-) |
Reviewed By: AJ Angelique [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2002 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving this story! Can;t wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Sonic On: December 16, 2002 18:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey, I really like that one... I don't really care too much about the BE Addventure, but that tread is great... I hope it is continued (soon) |
Reviewed By: Mike Carlson On: December 16, 2002 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful start which you need to continue and expand. |
Reviewed By: wiseman On: December 16, 2002 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far and hope ou continue it to the end |
Reviewed By: RIft120 On: December 16, 2002 15:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmm it owuld seem thatyou gave htis a seperate existence. Can this mean that .... Your going ot continue this fic instead of leaving it as just an omake??? Oh I do hope so |
