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"Going to the Reunon" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
Reviewed By: Arina Sakizaki On: January 08, 2003 12:38 CST Rating(s): Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm sorry but the grammar in this was terrible. Perhaps you should rewrite this, correcting those mistakes. It sounds like a good plot so far, however.
Reviewed By: ladybird2223 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 21:05 CST Comment/Review: ok i don't want to sound harsh or anything but you have to watch your grammer and i could barely follow what of ur story u have because ur missing words and punctuation marks and have sentences run together with no paragraph seperation. if u can fix these problems u should be fine. the storyline so far sounds interesting.

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