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| "Duo's Execution" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Shella-lady On: September 03, 2003 06:17 CDT
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This was ... well, interesting, at least. Aside from the 'What the-?' aspect, I'd say it's pretty well written. If there's any complaints, I think you might have let the weirdness stand on its own a bit much. Adding a bit more detail & description here & there might have fleshed it out a bit. Other than that, a pretty good job with a pretty weird subject! Strangeness factor was almost matched by humour factor -- I'm thinking of Quatre biting Duo's tongue here. Overall, decent.
Cheers,
--Shella-lady | Reviewed By: Dewshine... lord, I need a new name... On: January 12, 2002 22:08 CST
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Ok, that was strange... I liked the beginning, but the ending was just weird. But, hey, like I said, it wasn't bad! |
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