Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 00:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright! I like highschool fics that are realistic! I'm curious ... is this auto-biographical or just based on stuff that's happened to people you know? Or, is it completely made up but in a way that it COULD have been real?
Vegeta ... an actor!?!? You know "actor" is just another name for "liar," right? j/k This could be interesting ... they were in TEMPEST, together!? I LOVE that play!! What parts did they play??
`Yummy, you taste good.'
WOW, that little line was the hook! Although, I'm wondering ... is the the little Vegeta from Saiyan saga or the older one? Why? Well...I just can't exactly hear the older Veg saying, "Yummy." "Yum," maybe. But it's not THAT important. *shrugs* Just my opinion.
So what happens 5th period!?!?! :D
Can't wait for more. ^_^
(I HATE to admit this to anyone, but ... I've been considering writing a couple highschool dbz fics myself. One is just kind of stupid and the other is ... kind of auto-biographical. Think I'm nuts?) |
