| "Left With Me" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 12:49 CDT
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poor little Yugi... *pats his head* this was so sad, but really good.
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: January 23, 2004 13:08 CST
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Well... I like! Yes! I'm going through and reading your fics! I like this! Dark, but with a happy ending! Bravo! Bravo! Adios!
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Reviewed By: AloeVera On: December 01, 2003 11:51 CST
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I rather like this--
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Reviewed By: Aloe On: October 23, 2003 19:23 CDT
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Different ... I rather like it actually, a happy suicide fic-- who'd have thunk it ...
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Reviewed By: Mononoke (to lazy to log in) On: August 31, 2003 09:21 CDT
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O.O Whoah |
Reviewed By: misc On: March 14, 2003 18:49 CST
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wow. you portray feelings so well! I truly felt...agony when you talked about Yugi and how 'I gave him everything...and he left...to her.'YOU_ARE_AWESOME! |
Reviewed By: mysticrice On: March 09, 2003 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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lovely, dark, depressing ... oh can how could it get any better |
Reviewed By: Hanieh On: February 03, 2003 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sob* its so touching. *sniff* you are such a good writer. |
Reviewed By: stupid kid 04 On: January 08, 2003 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!!!! like it |
Reviewed By: ZellDincht that cannot log on!!!!!!! dammit. On: December 26, 2002 14:36 CST
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oooh... i luv the DM part. i can even imagine it....... oh yeah, i can not log on to mm.o!!!! no i am not a faker.... :p i am at the library and is drunk on Sunny Delight. *groans....* |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: December 26, 2002 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWW! Miko that is beautiful and so realistic! You really brought the story to life and Yugi's POV was done wonderfully. I love the Dark Magician standing watch and later rescuing Yugi, very in character and a well developed plot. I give you 5 stars, and two thumbs up! |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 02:57 CST
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I would probably be screaming at you, but I'm in a depressive mood right now, so this seemed really good to me!! Just, remind me to never read it whilst I'm in a good mood, for nothing good'll come of that!
Anywho, it was really very sweet!
Ja!
Katmon =^.^= {AKA Okusama KK} |
Reviewed By: Sen On: December 19, 2002 07:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
. . .
...that was depressing. Good, but depressing. |
Reviewed By: Ro A. M. On: July 19, 2003 16:59 CDT
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Ro: blink blink.
Sa D. D.: Translation: 'interesting...
Ro: blink, eye twitch.
Sa: 'But how could you put Yami and Tea together?
Ro: blink, eyetwitch, double blink, pause, glare
Sa: 'And how exactly can they, um, do it, when they're spirits. Pause. Stop translating my actions, Sa! You're not here for that!
Ro: self-rightous smirk on face.
Sa: 'I can speak for my self thank you!' Oh yeah, well then, why don't you?
Ro: I'm in withdrawl right now.
Sa: Withdrawl? Why?
Ro: sniff. FF. Net's down. I wanted to update!
Sa: Okay...
Ro: What? It's my first free week from school and camp and I wanted to read, review, and update! But no, it's down!
Sa: So post your stories here too.
Ro: Ya think I should?
Sa: I think you should get to the point.
Ro: Which is?
Sa: Review this story.
Ro: Right!
Sa: Well?
Ro: Interesting, though I hate Tea/Anzu (the bitch), and would like nothing better than for her to get killed dead.
Sa: 'Killed dead'? What's that about? Isn't somebody dead once you killed them?
Ro: Yes, but you can never be too sure. Better make sure they're dead and killed so they'll never bother you again.
Sa: You're too wierd.
Ro: Whatever.
Ro A. M.'s overall thought on the fic: That think at the end sounded too much like Yugi's thoughts when with Yami as well and will probably get kicked to the curb by the Dark Magician as well.
Sa D. D.'s overall thought on the fic: Agree with Roam, but want to say that when Yugi's all like 'proof it. Take me' shit and all, I mean, didn't the D. M. prove it when he stopped him from killing himself? Why did they have to have sex too?
Ro: Why'd ya call me 'Roam?'
Sa: Cuz that's what your name and initials spell.
Ro: Well your name and initials spell 'Sadd.' ya want me to call you that?
Sa: Er, no.
Ro: So don't call me 'Roam'. Some peeps whose mind's in the gutter could so take that the wrong way.
Sa: True...
Cya!
Ro A. M.
Sa D. D. |
