| "New Beginnings" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: jgal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 09:47 CST
Comment/Review:
not bad... but not my fav. couple...or trio... since it's not humorous enough
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Reviewed By: Acacia_Jules [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved everything, except how you handled the Anzu situation . . . I think you were just . . . cruel to her, and then you just ignored the whole situation involving her. Not to mention the whole Yugi/Yami/Seto pairing came right out of the blue . . . Plus, I mean, how can you condem Anzu for the way she treats Yugi, when Bakura was basically knocking Jou around at first! It just doesn't make sense. Now, I'm not a Anzu(Tea) fan, I'm basically nutrual on the subject. All I want, is for each character to be written well, and fairly. And to be given at least a reason for the actions they make, what motivates them. I loved the fic, up until the Anzu part. Having her walk around all dazed (for a reason I STILL haven't figured out) was not good fic, unless you explain WHY. Not to mention just suddenly having that last threesome hook up, and just DROP the poor girl (SO cruel, especially when they're still hanging out with her all the time, that was just mean. I really saw no purpose in it, not to mention the whole Kiaba pairing . . . . how exactly did that work???)
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Reviewed By: 0020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god!!!! i've finally re-found you!! see i was hooked on this story on ff.net, and then i found it somewere else, and lost it...but YES!! I"VE FOUND IT!! (i'm really happy that i found your storys!!) i was so sad when ff.net deleated them but now i'm happy! please do continue or i shall cry!!! happy! |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: April 19, 2003 11:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, I just finished rereading it and I noticed that I hadn't reviewed it.
Naturally, since I reread it, I must like the story. ^-^ In fact, I love it, it's one of my favorites. It's wonderfully written and very much in character. Great story!
(Now I'm off to review Pressure as I probably forgot to review that one too... after I reread it anyway. ^-^) |
Reviewed By: AuroraDragonKaya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 17:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad to see this again!!! This was one of the first YuGiOh fanfictions I ever read, and one of the first yaoi, and still one of my favorites! Please tell me you're going to post the sequal to pressure and what you have to the sequal of this? PWEEEEAASE??? **big, shiny puppy eyes** |
Reviewed By: Suppi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cries with joy* This is the BEST FIC I have read with a Joey/Ryou/Bakura pairing ever. This is soooooo wonderful! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!! You have brought so much joy to my life, I just want to give you a big hug! You are a truly gifted author and I look forward to reading more of your work. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Nkoah On: January 17, 2003 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*waves excitedly*
I hope you remember my email I sent you where I told you how much I loved this story (I found your story off of that icetemple.tripod.com site). But, that site is now down, and I'm so glad I found your story again ^-^!! Are you going to finish "Bitter Cold Passions"???
Your writing is so awesome...please never stop! ^-^!
~Nkoah~ (NkoahValatia@hotmail.com) |
Reviewed By: Makos Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 04:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great read! Looking forward to more. Love your descriptive style of writing. Looking forward to more.
-- Mako's Queen |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: December 19, 2002 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!! SO KAWAII!!!!!!! ^_^ PLEASE have more SOON! Domo Arigato! =D |
Reviewed By: Lancer Monna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always thanks for the great read, and I can't wait for more from you.
^-^ |
Reviewed By: Sinsisters [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 16:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Bitch! Lol, hey you! (Hehe- is that antarctica fic still coming along?)^__^ Glad I found you again! Knew the NC-ban couldn't keep DP down! ^^
Again- as i've said time and again- love it, love you, thinking about being you for halloween... and i must say...you've been one of my biggest influences in writing YGO fanfiction. You've got to have written one of the only stomachable saps yet! ^_^, love ya DP.
-pyrrotsumi, sinsisters |
Reviewed By: Yami-Jen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2002 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic on ff.net! It's good to see it back up! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Middie Night [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 18:08 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay!!! DP you are the best. I missed you when they deleted all the NC-17 fics. I totaly loved it I can't wait for the other two. Love ya. |
