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Reviewed By: Lord_InuYasha24 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2004 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great,but update soon. i think it should be a yami\jou\yugi thing.n don't make me give you my puppydog eyes.0 0 pwease!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^ If you do, i'll be happy. * * U
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Reviewed By: anne bolyen On: July 05, 2004 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are you going to finish this thing or what its been nearly two years and you havent finished it.What happened did you die hurry up.and make it tatsuya and yugi.
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Reviewed By: Neo-QueenRini [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're evil do you know that? |
Reviewed By: XNeko_YoukaixX On: August 20, 2003 10:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok now that i know what your going through i'll stup up for a while but as soon as you can you better update this fic, i'm diein' to know what Yami & Yugi are goin' to do next ( assumin' that Yami survives his attemt to kill himself ) is Yami & Yugi finally goin' to get together or is it goin' to stay as Jou & Yugi ( in my opinion i love it when Yami & Yugi are together Jou can go off to Seto, 'cause i think Jou & Seto also make a cute couple =^__^= anyway keep goin' as soon as you computer gets fixed ) |
Reviewed By: XxNeko_YoukaixX On: August 20, 2003 10:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU WANT YOUR READERS TO GO INSANE FOR HAVING TO WAIT FOREVER FOR YOU TO UPDATE THIS FIC!!!!!!!! I'M ON MY LAST NERVE WAITING FOR YOU TO UPDATE, I'VE BEEN WAITIN' FOR 6 MOUTHS FOR YOU TO UPDATE!!!!! I MEAN THIS IS A REALLY GOOD FIC YOU JUST CAN'T LEAVE IT HANGIN' HOPIN' IT'LL FINIH IT ON ITS OWN YOU HEAR MEEE!!!!!!! I WANT TO READ MORE BUT YOUR NOT LETTIN' ME & I'M GETTIN' VERY PISSED OFF!!!!!!!!!!! SO HURRY UP & GET GOIN' ON THE FIC PLEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ChibiChanLain On: August 20, 2003 06:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am truely sorry everyone! I had a recent computer crash and I lost my word processor! I can't write any fics because then they would be full of grammer errors and spelling mistakes. I really want to continue my fics but I can't! I am terribly sorry!
I will eventually get my word processor back and start writing my fics again. Just please bare with me!
Love, Chibi-chan Lain |
Reviewed By: XxNeko_YoukaixX On: August 18, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT THE FUCK UPDATE ALREADY I'VE BEEN WAITING SINCE YOU LAST UPDATED THIS STORY & YOU STILL HAVEN'T UPDATED. WHAT THE FUCKIN' HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU, YOU DON'T JUST START A TERIFFIC STORY & JUST STOP 'CAUSE YOU FUCKIN' FEEL LIKE IT YOU NEED TO FUCKIN' CONTINUE WITH THIS OR HELP GOD I WILL FUCKIN' HUNT YOU DOWN & MAKE YOU CONTINUE ON UPDATING THE FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (not literly but it shows how my patients very & i mean very thin i mean come on i've been waiting for God knows how long & you still haven't updated & i'm just about 100% that the other readers are getting very impatient 'cause this is a great fic & you not updating is not helping at all, i mean what kind of writer are you if you don't even finish what you started. So PLEASE & i mean PLEASE update soon like give us a few chapters to make up to the readers ( gives puppy eye look ) PLEASE i'm on my knees begging to you PLEASE update.) soon |
Reviewed By: XxNeko_YoukaixX On: August 05, 2003 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lked it buT would you please update soon already i've been waiting forever to know whats next but you haven't updated yet & i'm getting very impatient!! so please update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: hound On: August 01, 2003 22:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey when are you going to post a new chapter of this |
Reviewed By: megsery On: July 17, 2003 22:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Does It Matta On: June 19, 2003 20:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
continuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuueeeeeeeeeee. plz. updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. soooooooooooooooon. thaaannnnnnnnkkkkkkkks. |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 09:27 CST
Comment/Review:
LD: hehe, Yami is dead!
Karen: ok, first, he isn't really Yami in this story and second, we don't know that he is dead.
LD: Damn.
Karen: I think this is a really good story. Although Tatsuya is a strange character, I can appreciate the anger he feels toward the whole situation. It is so sad that he is trying to kill himself to keep from hurting Yugi. I guess it is romantic in a sick and twisted sort of way.
LD: you think everything is romantic.
Karen: Not really, I am just a bit of an optimist. And I am hoping that the Yami character is not really dead. Please update soon... |
Reviewed By: UnconditionalBeliever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 20:09 CST
Comment/Review:
GIMME!!! :hugs fic: keep up da good work! |
Reviewed By: Yami no Chrestes On: February 08, 2003 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darina: I love the story. This is one of the best stories I read so far. I'm obsessed with Yu-Gi-Oh fan fiction.
Chrestes(Looks up from reading some papers on the couch): You can say that again.
Darina: Ahh, come on, you know you like those stories, too. You're just too shy to admit it for some reason.
Chrestes: Look, I'm not shy, I'm really not into that stuff.
Darina:(*Grabs hold of the paper Chrestes is reading)
Chrestes: Hey!!!'
Darina: Oh, than I guess this printed version of this fic you were just reading with such interest got here by mistake in your hands, hmm?
(Chrestes mumbles under her breath)
Chrestes: I haven't finished yet, okay?
Darina: Sure, whatever, I think this is your fifth time thought.(*Hands the fic to the whistling Chrestes, who grabs it and starts reading again)
Darina: Wait, is this PRINTED OUT?! Chrestes! I told you that my mom said no more print outs until we get a new color cortage! Now I'm doomed because of you. My mom's gonna kill me...
Chrestes:(Looks up) I just found this lying on the table already printed out.
Darina: But, if you didn't, then...(both think for a moment) Joey!!! Did you mess with the printer again?!(Sees Joey sneaking out) Come back here when I'm talking to you, Joey Wheeler!(*Runs after Joey leaving Chrestes alone)
Chrestes: Wow, what's gotten into her, it was just some colors. Anyway, since Darina isn't here(*a sweat appears on her face as she hears Darina yelling to Joey about something*)I'm going to say her line for this fic...REALLY good, PLLEEEAAASEE continue. Oh, and don't tell her or anyone else but, I like this fic also a lot, so keep at it, okay? |
Reviewed By: Ryu-Chan On: February 10, 2003 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you!!!! I'm still waiting for my update!!!How dare you write such a fabulous story and leave us hanging!!!!!I'm gonna hunt you down if you don't update soon....XD |
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