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| "Pains of the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: shadow cat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok that person in da begining... was that a boy or girl u kept changing it. he she he she. please fix that thanx. other than that its great sooooooo far | Reviewed By: Lina the Outlawed Bomber [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 07:52 CST
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I have to put this up, Jack Nanami own char haven't put up his or Ryo Kawa's or my other characters profiles, cause I've been busy. So what if they have the same name...they're part of this big story I'm writing. Jack and Bang Nanami are wolf-demons, Ryo Kawa is a mystical elf. Ruu's not there...so....that is all I have to say. | Reviewed By: MR.DEVIL [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 18:03 CST
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Also Mr.Devil isn't my screen name, for gods sake i wish Mediaminer would get its act together! My email address is SuperSayinSammy@aol.com if u have any complaints | Reviewed By: MR.DEVIL [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 18:02 CST
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hn Hiro, Jack, Ryo,and Shin aren't ur characters, they may have different personality's, but they do already belong to an anime! Hiro belongs to Working Desings Lunar 2, Jack is in Zoids (Jack Sisco, member of the Lightning Team), Ryo belongs to Disney's Digimon, and Shin is in Yodorin Samurai Troopers (in the US known as Ronin Warriors!). So technically, u didn't make them up, but the other two do!!
Anyway, for the review! I really like this fic! Its very enjoyable! i also like the Bit/Brad pairing. Kudos, very good!! |
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