Reviewed By: Super Saiya-jin Black Wolf Rei-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2002 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
k, i'm not trying to sound rude or mean or anything like that, but i have to tell you the plot is very unoriginal! I mean, you may have changed things around some, but still, this is exactly like the plot of pokemon's first episode!!!
I know you may have thought that this was a good at first, but i don't believe that your goal is going to be accomplished if you continue writing like this (nearly following the pokemon story line).
Anyway, like i said before, i'm not trying to be rude, but i thought you would like some constructive critisizum.
~SSJ Black Wolf Rei-Rei |
