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Reviewed By: Xane On: January 23, 2003 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work. Pleaaaaaaaaaaase continue. |
Reviewed By: not_important On: January 11, 2003 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should upgrade. This is one of the best T/M fics ever. Pleeeeeeeeeease update soon. |
Reviewed By: LJ On: December 24, 2002 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In chapter 23, you said and I quote "she was 23 and not a virgin" (Marron), but you also mentioned that Marron is 20 in the first or the second chapter, I don't remember which. I just got a little confused, but I enjoyed the story a lot. Please continue soon. |
Reviewed By: vegeta_fanatic On: January 25, 2003 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayyy! New chapters. Please post the new ones soon |
Reviewed By: Rebecca On: December 15, 2002 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! Please continue really really soon. This is my most favorite fic out there. My friend almost killed me because I reccomended her this story, and it's not finished yet. I really want to read the next chapter soon. I am anxious to see what's going to happen between Marron and Mirai Trunks. They're my favorite couple. Please UPDATE!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Xanthe On: December 09, 2002 08:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!! Your story is great. I usually get bored reading T/M ff, but yours is great. Please make the next chapter a little bit more MT/M romance. Please post the next chapter. Thanks for the story. Bye |
Reviewed By: Xanthe On: December 09, 2002 08:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!! Your story is great. I usually get bored reading T/M ff, but yours is great. Please make the next chapter a little bit more MT/M romance. Please post the next chapter. Thanks for the story. Bye |
Reviewed By: Xanthe On: December 09, 2002 08:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!! Your story is great. I usually get bored reading T/M ff, but yours is great. Please make the next chapter a little bit more MT/M romance. Please post the next chapter. Thanks for the story. Bye |
Reviewed By: mal On: August 19, 2002 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story, acually kept be reading!!! Love the plot! Please update soon. PLEASE |
Reviewed By: swordfighter_slayer On: August 16, 2002 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic isprovded withlots of twists that i wouldn't have been able to dream up.Very good plot! |
Reviewed By: DBZ_Ari On: June 06, 2002 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! You are a really great writer.
Please send the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: bebe On: March 13, 2002 15:55 CST
Comment/Review:
great story! do u go 2 skool in virginia? |
Reviewed By: Ladyren [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2002 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you a 9 in enjoyment because T/P was in it and I hate Pan but it was lovely. MT/M 4ever!!!!! |
Reviewed By: bunny - littlemoonhime On: October 12, 2001 13:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
hiyas ;D
Awesome story!! Please write the next chapter soon!! I can't wait to read more!! |
Reviewed By: Kawai_Fox On: October 21, 2001 23:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story! I'm too tired now to write much, but so far I love it. I'll be looking for more in the future, so you'd better update! Great story, great plot, understandable writing style... You have the makings of a great writer, if you're not one already. Keep up the good work! |
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