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Reviewed By: Kenix On: June 06, 2003 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! Your story is doing great. |
Reviewed By: DBZ FAN On: April 13, 2003 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update when you're free!!!! I check your fanfic every week to see if it get updated =) |
Reviewed By: DBZ FAN On: April 13, 2003 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update when you're free!!!! I check your fanfic every week to see if it get updated =) Font Color |
Reviewed By: dbz_fan On: March 17, 2003 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update more often if possible. =) |
Reviewed By: Hope_Poe26 On: March 11, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story a lot... I kinda hoped that you had finished the story in 26 chapters but by the eighteenth chapter I learned that wasn't so. Too bad.
Well, I have no complaints. It's all good. Just finish the damn thing already |
Reviewed By: BJ On: March 01, 2003 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update quickly please. I really have to know the ending. |
Reviewed By: ~.~ On: February 12, 2003 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please go on! I plead at your heels to go on 'cause this is soo goor and good and fun! Please go on! |
Reviewed By: Angel On: February 13, 2003 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY think you should right more cuz this is really! good! plEASE UPDATE SOON! |
Reviewed By: Angel On: February 13, 2003 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY think you should right more cuz this is really! good! plEASE UPDATE SOON! |
Reviewed By: More chapters!!!! On: January 26, 2003 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting for these new chapters for so long. Please write more. The story is getting more interesting than ever. |
Reviewed By: anime girl On: January 26, 2003 09:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please hurry and update soon! i've been waiting for updates too much! :( |
Reviewed By: DBZ_Ari On: January 25, 2003 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks so much for posting the next chapters! It's one of the greatest stories I've ever read. Please post the new chapters soon! I hate cliff hangers ^-^ |
Reviewed By: reviewer On: January 25, 2003 20:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello,
I think Mirai should not remember or know anything that happened between him and Marron to avoid them being uncomfortable. Then, Mirai begins to realize how much he loves Marron. This is only my opinion so you can write whatever you want. Great story so far. I can't wait to read those other chapters. Post them soon please.
Bye |
Reviewed By: vegeta_rules On: January 24, 2003 08:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: chibi480 On: January 23, 2003 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for you to post new chapters. Please post the rest soon. I hate it when author writes cliffhanger. Plzzzzz post the other chaps. Thanks for the story |
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