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| "In Love, I Reach Out to You" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Jaela Noble On: May 27, 2004 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Murr...>.< It's a goooood fic...justa bit anticlimatic. I was lookign forward to the whole Hakkai/Gojyo confrontation and then poof! No confrontation. Murr... I liked it though. Keep up the good work! Just...add in a bit of a climax, ne? ^.~
| Reviewed By: Skater Punk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 03:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fic but I just rated it honestly.Sorry...I don't think hakkai will ever insult gojyo...well keep up tha good work!Sayonara!
-Skater punk | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: December 30, 2002 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffles*.....that,....*sob,sniff,sob*...is soo,...*sniff*...SSAAAPPPYYYY,....*sniff*...and,..*sniff*...BEAAUTIFULLLL,...*sniffles*...with enough angst mix in it,...*sniff*...to make,...*sob,sniff*....an entire fleet of,..*sniff*...elephants cry,....*sniffles*...*blow runny nose*...*sniff*....one of the best,...*sniff*...G+H fic i've read,...*sniff*....keep-up the good work kay,.....*sniffles*...till next time,....*sniff*.....JAAAAAAAAAA and,...*sniffles*.....GAAANBBBATEEEEEEEEE-NEEEEEEEEEEE!!-_-!! | Reviewed By: LN Tora On: December 20, 2002 17:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I actually meant to say something at ff.net, but this is just as good.
First and foremost, it's a nice read. I like Gojyo's inner turmoil between his 'voices'. No, he can't hold a grudge, even when he has all rights to do so.
Being a greedy reader, I thought the make-up scene (for lack of a better term) could have went into more detail. Not necessarily lemon (though that wouldn't hurt), but just them talking a little more.
Anyway, I see you have another fic here, so I'm off to read it. Ja ne! |
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