Reviewed By: IceAngel On: December 30, 2002 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps slowly*
A little fast even from someone who's recieved that comment himself
try to be a little slower on the story, take some time to add detail and make it richer, yer story could very easily become excellent, with a little time and effort
IA |
