| "Can't Hide What I Feel" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yami_Dragonmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 07:17 CST
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Argh! When Bakura finds out about the rape he's gonna feel so guilty becuase he could've saved Ryou had he not blocked him!!! Thankyou for putting in more angst! I love Ryou being abused. ^___^ So I guess Seto and Ryou are a couple now huh? What's going to happen about Joey?????? MORE ANGST PLEASE!!!! ^____^ As for that title...how about "Friends Through the Ages" Well? I was never good at names anyway. *sigh* Good story though!
YDM (previously ZDM) |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 05, 2003 15:43 CST
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Ah! Poor Ryou... I hope Bakura never blocks him again. And you're right, although it's cruel and he doesn't deserve it, Ryou just kinda fits in as an abused person, unfortuately for him.
Will Bakura find him there like that, notice something's wrong, try to find out while nicely attempting to comfort him?
*gasp* Or Bakura will never come home that night and Ryou will just mutely go to school, more isolated than ever and he'll turn to Seto after some persuasion and noticing on Seto's part?
Or poor Ryou could fall into depression and keep everyone in the dark about what happened until he finally commits suicide? (hope not)
ooo, so many thoughts about what could happen next. ^-^; I can't wait to see what you pick. |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 03, 2003 22:41 CST
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Oooo, evil mean Joey. Never saw one of those.
I say write the scene. If not, then at least write Ryou's thoughts during it, that way you won't technically have written the scene, but you'll have all the Ryou thoughts ('I can't believe this is happening' 'Why?' etc etc) and that's what's important to the feel of the story. Heh, maybe that's the way you thought about writting the scene to begin with. |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam On: January 03, 2003 11:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I could never see Joey as the raping type, why? Cos his just too dorky to do such a thing...
Joey: Hey!!!!
Oh sorry... Your not dorky...
Joey: That's better...
I meant doggy...
Joey: O_O'
^______________^ #Who let the dogs out!?!?#
Rest of YGO cast: WHO!!! WHO, WHO, WHO!!!
Joey: >() |
Reviewed By: Yami_Dragonmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 10:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue!!! More conflict please! But DON'T make Ryou move or I'll personally rip out your throat and feed it back to you!!!
ZDM |
Reviewed By: Yuki-chan On: January 06, 2003 18:41 CST
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I love Seto/Ryou pairings as much as Bakura/Ryou pairings! ^___^ Seto was so SWEET!!!! And Jounouchi is very OOC. It even surprises me as well. A simple jealousy caused him to become a bit sadistic and sick. Whoa. Anyway, LOVE THIS FIC! PLEASE UPDATE, NEH? |
Reviewed By: ZDM On: December 23, 2002 12:33 CST
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This is my first ever review! Not knowing how it works...but I'll figure it out! ^_^ I have a sudden addiction to this story, and to cut the story is just mean! *sulk* WHY couldn't you finish the story! Now you have to make it extra angsty just to make up for it! (Joey gets attacked but gets rescued by KAIBA becuase he wants Ryou to be happy? *hint hint*)
ZDM |
Reviewed By: Nakuru Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 00:03 CST
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Ryou’s Boyfriend: Umm... Malik
Ryou’s admirer: OMG! Make it Seto Kaiba please?? |
Reviewed By: kaoru On: January 03, 2003 07:58 CST
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I enjoy every of your fic want wait the next part every day for all your fic
please write the rape part *___*
like when ryou is hurt. he's so beautiful. |
Reviewed By: Raven Gril On: January 06, 2003 13:21 CST
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HI...just did a quick read through of Cant Hide What I feel.... not to bad....definatly somethin i could enjoy...gona have to read it again later when i have more time...but as for titles for fanfics... i can think up of a few.. juts takes me a while...if ya like. i'll post em up here or e-mail ya...my e-mail is rlselden@hotmail.com but please let me know who you are in the subject..k...good luck |
Reviewed By: brat On: January 06, 2003 14:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a story. Great writing by the way. Will Seto get even with Joey by giving him the same treatment? If he even finds out. Will Ryou still love Joey anyway? I look forward to seeing you resolve this! |
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