| "Can't Hide What I Feel" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 18:09 CDT
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beautiful story! As usual, great angst... I seem to have a thing for angsty stories, and you have a thing for terrorizing Ryou... we make a great pair! lol Now to find yet another story... Yes, I'm having fun!
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Reviewed By: Shorty* On: April 06, 2003 17:12 CDT
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Heh, you managed to keep Joey alive. I must say, I was expecting shadow realm or something, but your way is more fitting for the story. I liked the way you managed to resolve things peacefully. Great story! ^-^[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: RyouCrazy On: March 21, 2003 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, it's good from what I've read mostly. The only thing is Jou.. He's totally out of character. Jou is a huge sweetheart, and my personal opinion is he'd do anything for his friends, and he'd never hurt him. He's always so forgiving and such...
Other then Jou... It's a pretty good fic. Don't hurt me, please? I'm trying to be honest. ^^;;;;[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 09:21 CST
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You are the Angst Master!!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: February 24, 2003 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to make a senquel to this *i think that how you spell it*[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 08:24 CST
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PP-NNOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT FFFFFFAIIIIIIIIIIIRRRRRRRRRRRR!! That was mean, a cliffy....
YPP- /Rereading the fic/ that was---interesting...[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Shashomiru On: February 18, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Back on the same day.Manufique!I havn't finished the story(CH.10) but doing good. Natsume Nara![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Celeste On: February 18, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.K.So I actually found your story pretty interesting (cough).Mmmbbuut aaanyway I really found it quite lovely...forget that last quote.Sooo I'm a realy big Joey so...and my friend is a really big Seto fan,so she was pretty ticked when I told her about your story.I'm thinking about writing,typing,sending,living,eating,whatever a story of my own...heh heh..which means I can be EVIL MWA HAHAHAHAHA...no...wait...I guess parents do conquer all.(sigh)oh well.My day shall surcome..I hope.I'm still working it out.But over all rated your story and nicknamed it A Gay Festivle.Way to go!Now..why am I telling all this?...Because I'm desparate!O.K.?My screen name is new and I am totally obsessed with Japan Anime and anything that has to do with Japan.Well I could go on for hours but I can't.So email me Shashomiru@yahoo.com.ARF ARF:BYE BYE!!!(whew).[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: shadow fox girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
have to update soon it was a great story.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Ayumu On: February 15, 2003 19:32 CST
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*dance dance, cheer cheer* =D I'm so glad I checked back twice today. ^_^ Great chappy! Can't wait for more. Jou-chan must paaaaaaaaay! *chases him with a pitchfork* I love Jou-chan but I love Ryou more. XD[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Ayumu On: February 10, 2003 20:11 CST
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What!? I haven't reviewed this ficcy yet? e.e; I thought I did! I sorry! ^^; And again... what will Yami's reaction be? XD Lol! Btw, good ficcy, you made me mad at Jouno-chan and that's not easy to do![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: AMG On: February 11, 2003 21:46 CST
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SUPER AWESOME! MORE CHAPPY SOON!!! PLEASE!!!!! ^_^ Jaaaa!
(BakaJoey)[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: February 14, 2003 14:28 CST
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Bakura MUST find out! He must! Then there can be guilt at closing the link and revenge-minded-evil-Bakura-ness.
Something has got to happen to Joey, I can't wait to find out what it'll be. (I'm not a Joey-basher or anything, but for your story, something should happen to him, that's all I'm saying)[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: February 06, 2003 23:01 CST
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Gooooooood fic. Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooood Lemoniness! Thank you so much for that. ^_~ Is someone gonna kick Jou's ass? I hope so he deserves it!! Yes! ^-^ SO UPDATE SOON PLEASE! ARIGATO! ^_^ Ja ne![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: W.S#3 On: February 26, 2003 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story Sniff*Sniff. So Beautiful
Summer isnt here sniff*sniff. But this story cheered me up. Consider Making a sequel ^_^[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: W.S #3 & W.S #2 On: February 22, 2003 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A GREAT STORY . PLEASE CCONTINUE ^_^. ( looks at summer sniffing her underarm *sniff* *sniff*) O_~ ?[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 08:41 CST
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*pingpong* I just finished it and I say----How cute!!! On the other hand I say----Finish this or I'll set YamiPP on you!!!!
*YamiPP* /Snaling and foaming at the mouth on the end of a heavy duty chain cemented to the Kaiba Corps building/[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 08:30 CST
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*pingpong* Devilish....I LUV IT!!!!!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 18:35 CST
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Very goods!! Can't wait for more!!
Ja!
Katmon =^.^={AKA Okusama KK}[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 12, 2003 11:54 CST
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Is Bakura going to find out? Maybe he can send Joey to the Shadow Realm. (lol, that seems to be my answer to all bad things)
Geez, Joey's thinking rationally again... too bad that doesn't really help now that he's already been temporarily insane (or whatever) to Ryou.
I hope something nice/sweet happens between Ryou and Seto.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: kaoru On: January 06, 2003 09:59 CST
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bakura is very beautiful when he cry *___*
is I can vote between joey and seto, I vote for seto.
I like joey but I see him as seto's uke. and I prefere see ryou with a great male ^^[ Request Review Removal ] |
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