| "Can't Hide What I Feel" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: AMG On: February 11, 2003 21:46 CST
Comment/Review:
SUPER AWESOME! MORE CHAPPY SOON!!! PLEASE!!!!! ^_^ Jaaaa!
(BakaJoey) |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: February 14, 2003 14:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Bakura MUST find out! He must! Then there can be guilt at closing the link and revenge-minded-evil-Bakura-ness.
Something has got to happen to Joey, I can't wait to find out what it'll be. (I'm not a Joey-basher or anything, but for your story, something should happen to him, that's all I'm saying) |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: February 06, 2003 23:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Gooooooood fic. Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooood Lemoniness! Thank you so much for that. ^_~ Is someone gonna kick Jou's ass? I hope so he deserves it!! Yes! ^-^ SO UPDATE SOON PLEASE! ARIGATO! ^_^ Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: W.S#3 On: February 26, 2003 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story Sniff*Sniff. So Beautiful
Summer isnt here sniff*sniff. But this story cheered me up. Consider Making a sequel ^_^ |
Reviewed By: W.S #3 & W.S #2 On: February 22, 2003 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A GREAT STORY . PLEASE CCONTINUE ^_^. ( looks at summer sniffing her underarm *sniff* *sniff*) O_~ ? |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 08:41 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* I just finished it and I say----How cute!!! On the other hand I say----Finish this or I'll set YamiPP on you!!!!
*YamiPP* /Snaling and foaming at the mouth on the end of a heavy duty chain cemented to the Kaiba Corps building/ |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 08:30 CST
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*pingpong* Devilish....I LUV IT!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 18:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Very goods!! Can't wait for more!!
Ja!
Katmon =^.^={AKA Okusama KK} |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 12, 2003 11:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Is Bakura going to find out? Maybe he can send Joey to the Shadow Realm. (lol, that seems to be my answer to all bad things)
Geez, Joey's thinking rationally again... too bad that doesn't really help now that he's already been temporarily insane (or whatever) to Ryou.
I hope something nice/sweet happens between Ryou and Seto. |
Reviewed By: kaoru On: January 06, 2003 09:59 CST
Comment/Review:
bakura is very beautiful when he cry *___*
is I can vote between joey and seto, I vote for seto.
I like joey but I see him as seto's uke. and I prefere see ryou with a great male ^^ |
Reviewed By: Yami_Dragonmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 07:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Argh! When Bakura finds out about the rape he's gonna feel so guilty becuase he could've saved Ryou had he not blocked him!!! Thankyou for putting in more angst! I love Ryou being abused. ^___^ So I guess Seto and Ryou are a couple now huh? What's going to happen about Joey?????? MORE ANGST PLEASE!!!! ^____^ As for that title...how about "Friends Through the Ages" Well? I was never good at names anyway. *sigh* Good story though!
YDM (previously ZDM) |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 05, 2003 15:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Ah! Poor Ryou... I hope Bakura never blocks him again. And you're right, although it's cruel and he doesn't deserve it, Ryou just kinda fits in as an abused person, unfortuately for him.
Will Bakura find him there like that, notice something's wrong, try to find out while nicely attempting to comfort him?
*gasp* Or Bakura will never come home that night and Ryou will just mutely go to school, more isolated than ever and he'll turn to Seto after some persuasion and noticing on Seto's part?
Or poor Ryou could fall into depression and keep everyone in the dark about what happened until he finally commits suicide? (hope not)
ooo, so many thoughts about what could happen next. ^-^; I can't wait to see what you pick. |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 03, 2003 22:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooo, evil mean Joey. Never saw one of those.
I say write the scene. If not, then at least write Ryou's thoughts during it, that way you won't technically have written the scene, but you'll have all the Ryou thoughts ('I can't believe this is happening' 'Why?' etc etc) and that's what's important to the feel of the story. Heh, maybe that's the way you thought about writting the scene to begin with. |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam On: January 03, 2003 11:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I could never see Joey as the raping type, why? Cos his just too dorky to do such a thing...
Joey: Hey!!!!
Oh sorry... Your not dorky...
Joey: That's better...
I meant doggy...
Joey: O_O'
^______________^ #Who let the dogs out!?!?#
Rest of YGO cast: WHO!!! WHO, WHO, WHO!!!
Joey: >() |
Reviewed By: Yami_Dragonmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 10:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Please continue!!! More conflict please! But DON'T make Ryou move or I'll personally rip out your throat and feed it back to you!!!
ZDM |
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