| "Can't Hide What I Feel" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 18:09 CDT
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beautiful story! As usual, great angst... I seem to have a thing for angsty stories, and you have a thing for terrorizing Ryou... we make a great pair! lol Now to find yet another story... Yes, I'm having fun!
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Reviewed By: Shorty* On: April 06, 2003 17:12 CDT
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Heh, you managed to keep Joey alive. I must say, I was expecting shadow realm or something, but your way is more fitting for the story. I liked the way you managed to resolve things peacefully. Great story! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: RyouCrazy On: March 21, 2003 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, it's good from what I've read mostly. The only thing is Jou.. He's totally out of character. Jou is a huge sweetheart, and my personal opinion is he'd do anything for his friends, and he'd never hurt him. He's always so forgiving and such...
Other then Jou... It's a pretty good fic. Don't hurt me, please? I'm trying to be honest. ^^;;;; |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 09:21 CST
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You are the Angst Master!!! |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: February 24, 2003 10:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have to make a senquel to this *i think that how you spell it* |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 08:24 CST
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PP-NNOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT FFFFFFAIIIIIIIIIIIRRRRRRRRRRRR!! That was mean, a cliffy....
YPP- /Rereading the fic/ that was---interesting... |
Reviewed By: Shashomiru On: February 18, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Back on the same day.Manufique!I havn't finished the story(CH.10) but doing good. Natsume Nara! |
Reviewed By: Celeste On: February 18, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.K.So I actually found your story pretty interesting (cough).Mmmbbuut aaanyway I really found it quite lovely...forget that last quote.Sooo I'm a realy big Joey so...and my friend is a really big Seto fan,so she was pretty ticked when I told her about your story.I'm thinking about writing,typing,sending,living,eating,whatever a story of my own...heh heh..which means I can be EVIL MWA HAHAHAHAHA...no...wait...I guess parents do conquer all.(sigh)oh well.My day shall surcome..I hope.I'm still working it out.But over all rated your story and nicknamed it A Gay Festivle.Way to go!Now..why am I telling all this?...Because I'm desparate!O.K.?My screen name is new and I am totally obsessed with Japan Anime and anything that has to do with Japan.Well I could go on for hours but I can't.So email me Shashomiru@yahoo.com.ARF ARF:BYE BYE!!!(whew). |
Reviewed By: shadow fox girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
have to update soon it was a great story. |
Reviewed By: Ayumu On: February 15, 2003 19:32 CST
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*dance dance, cheer cheer* =D I'm so glad I checked back twice today. ^_^ Great chappy! Can't wait for more. Jou-chan must paaaaaaaaay! *chases him with a pitchfork* I love Jou-chan but I love Ryou more. XD |
Reviewed By: Ayumu On: February 10, 2003 20:11 CST
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What!? I haven't reviewed this ficcy yet? e.e; I thought I did! I sorry! ^^; And again... what will Yami's reaction be? XD Lol! Btw, good ficcy, you made me mad at Jouno-chan and that's not easy to do! |
Reviewed By: AMG On: February 11, 2003 21:46 CST
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SUPER AWESOME! MORE CHAPPY SOON!!! PLEASE!!!!! ^_^ Jaaaa!
(BakaJoey) |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: February 14, 2003 14:28 CST
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Bakura MUST find out! He must! Then there can be guilt at closing the link and revenge-minded-evil-Bakura-ness.
Something has got to happen to Joey, I can't wait to find out what it'll be. (I'm not a Joey-basher or anything, but for your story, something should happen to him, that's all I'm saying) |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: February 06, 2003 23:01 CST
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Gooooooood fic. Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooood Lemoniness! Thank you so much for that. ^_~ Is someone gonna kick Jou's ass? I hope so he deserves it!! Yes! ^-^ SO UPDATE SOON PLEASE! ARIGATO! ^_^ Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: W.S#3 On: February 26, 2003 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story Sniff*Sniff. So Beautiful
Summer isnt here sniff*sniff. But this story cheered me up. Consider Making a sequel ^_^ |
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