| "Usagi in Fedual Japan" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Reviewed By: kitten_meru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2006 06:48 CST
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i just read chapter 1. i didn't like it. everything went by too fast. how could inu like her as a sister? he just met her! it was boring, not enough deatil, and it was NOT fun to read.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy's mate On: July 28, 2005 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 3 I wonder is theree more and I want to find out what this spell is that jaken is talking about...plus I've never read a story where Jaken was acually nice to someone other than Lord sesshomaru
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 3 it was great. Keep those chapters coming. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2004 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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Title: GemJewel
Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story demo... if u use japanese words dozo put the definitions. u didn't in chapter 2.
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Reviewed By: anime angel1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 23:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I love is esspecially Sess-chan please update soon ~Angel~
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Reviewed By: Silver On: July 20, 2003 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is very original...i like the whole usa/sess thing. i hope you up-date soon. please e-mail me when you do... Silver_Cosmos_Universe@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: uni On: July 06, 2003 12:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
i'm dieing here nead...to know...what....happens.
i realy like this fic please wright more.
uni |
Reviewed By: Moonstone On: June 21, 2003 01:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
The first chapter was fast, but the rest were okay. Though I do hope to see a update soon, your story has chaught a lot of my attention.
thanks |
Reviewed By: Jenna On: June 09, 2003 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so totally LOVE this story!!!! |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 23:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh come on now, you can't stop there! I agree with Gin, it is fast, but you did a good job of slowing it down. Hope you write more with this story soon! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Rachel On: June 03, 2003 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi *waves like an idiot* I LUV the pairing Sess/Serena and there are WAY too little fics of them out there. Keep up the good work and PLEAZ update soon *puppy dog eyes*
Ja ne. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ~*Senshi's Tenshi (Megami)*~ On: April 02, 2003 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED IT!!! write more chappies soon! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Ryu-chan On: March 17, 2003 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Is there more I want to read more cause Its really good your a good writer Hope you write more |
Reviewed By: Shiina On: February 27, 2003 10:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice story, but its going a little too fast... anyways, please update soon! |
Reviewed By: ills [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 17:11 CST
Comment/Review:
so jaken is going to put a spell on him? Anyway loved it! |
Reviewed By: ills [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 18:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope you contiune with this soon! |
Reviewed By: Usagi T. On: December 26, 2002 16:13 CST
Comment/Review:
This story is really cool and hope ya write more |
Reviewed By: Gin On: December 24, 2002 23:10 CST
Comment/Review:
that was FAST really really really fast O_O try not to rush things so much, if you spread it out longer and added some more detail and stuff it would be better... everything is fine its just ... fast sorry if i offend you, but please take this advice |
Reviewed By: chibi-chan On: December 23, 2002 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally love it! It's excellent! There's not many Inu Yasha/Sailor Moon crossovers! I love the pairing too. Hope you'll write more chapters like this! |
