| "Dreams Come True" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 15:11 CDT
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Ok, your last update was April 3rd, and the one before that was three days previous to that, including the 3rd. In that, you stated you were making your deadlines... so does that mean your deadlines are every three days? If they are, YOU'RE LATE! Today is the 7TH, FOUR days after. We really want to read! |
Reviewed By: Shadowmoon On: April 07, 2003 01:10 CDT
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Keep gooooooooooing. It's getting gooooooooood. :-) |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 20:28 CDT
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Ok, my last post was in the morning, so you've had ALL day to update...and you didn't! You're really bugging us readers... but we love you anyway! ^_^ (k, i hope that was enough sucking up) MORE! |
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 13:30 CDT
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you've got to be kidding me!!! You can leave me hangin' like that!!!! Oh you're soo mean!!! *sniff* N E ways plez write more soon! |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 16:39 CST
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Come on, write more! If it takes you this long to write with just Nazgirl hounding, hopefully you'll go faster with two!
More! please...^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lady Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I"m just so into this story and i want more!!! Update asap! |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: April 04, 2003 16:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that chapter! It might even be my favorite of them all!
I don't need to say MORE anyMORE because you already know I want MORE!
(more) |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 14:23 CST
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good chapter.. Pegasus is so manipulative, it's scary. Why didn't the others take shelter with Joey and Mina? More more! |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: March 31, 2003 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eyes open so wide they pop out and roll everywhere, making people who get queasy at that kind of thing scream for bloody murder and run around* Why thankies for appreciating hounding.
What am I supposed to do, anyway? Not hound?! I don't think so!
Great chappie btw. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 16:49 CST
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GREAT chapter! but now I really really want to know what she plans to do with that ring... |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 16:42 CST
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I know! In the last chapter, he knows that Pegasus is her dad! I thought maybe I accidentally skipped that *little* piece of information or something...I was confused... and he wasn't making a big deal... lol K, I'll read the new chapter now.
I think I can speak for all of us when I say that 12 DAYS IS WAY TOO LONG TO WAIT FOR ANOTHER UPDATE! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: March 31, 2003 11:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you post more since we're all dying here to find out what happens next?
;-P |
Reviewed By: Shadowmoon On: March 22, 2003 23:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Keep it up, it's getting better. ;) |
Reviewed By: Jen On: March 21, 2003 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the Story alot please update it please. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 15:08 CST
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The chasm between them? that doesn't sound too good... ugh, why does it take you so long to write! another chapter! |
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