| "Dreams Come True" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: Avvy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 02:24 CST
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This was a really good fic.. But Seto seemed kinda.. Out of character.. Some things. I could never image him doing.. (well, not so quick anyways) All in all, this was really good!
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Reviewed By: Child of Earendil On: November 27, 2003 10:15 CST
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Graces of the Valar. I don't know if you meant to do it, but your OC is one of the most dire Mary-Sues I've ever seen. Please do not take offense, but it's true. All the symptoms are there: extraordinary beauty, she calls Kaiba-san "Seto" when she first sees him, she's "better than Yuugi" at dueling - yawning as she beat Kaiba? No one disrespects my beloved that way...I'm really sorry. Maybe you did it on purpose. But as a fellow writer, I had to tell the truth. But please, PLEASE know that I mean no offense, and this is NOT meant as a flame.
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Reviewed By: Steffie On: July 18, 2003 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good "romance" scene. I don't know why you didn't write you own when you used to role play in The Blazing Fires Town of Gold. You are a great writer and I have always admired your work. You will be famous some day and I just can't wait to see what you come up with next. |
Reviewed By: L4 spce colony [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2003 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you r my favorite writer in the whole world. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2003 15:16 CDT
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You took so long to write such a short chapter! Grr... but I know you've been busy. Oh, and I'm ecstatic over the mention of myself!!! All I can say is you'd BETTER have some sequel-gears already turning in your head (hah, that sounds weird) or I'll be hounding you! lol, keep it up, I'm sure I'll talk to you. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: April 23, 2003 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesomoli chapter! But now I is so sad that there's only one more chapter...waah!
Maybe, for all of us, you can write another story? |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2003 14:34 CDT
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All I've got to say is you better write quick! I'm practically addicted to your story; I have to see what they're going to say! You are too cruel to always leave us hanging like this. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 10:24 CDT
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Evil cliffhanger! No! I did not expect to come back to such a frustrating chapter! grr... It was very good though, I'll give you points for that...^_^ |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: April 18, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You finally wrote more after a WHOLE WEEK of not writing! *shakes finger* I don't ever want you to do that again, y'hea? *is kidding*
I want to know what happens so post more! |
Reviewed By: Shadowmoon On: April 15, 2003 20:28 CDT
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I'm waiting patiently for the ending of the story. I must know what's going on with Kaiba and Mina. Please, I want to see what's up. (pulls a Wayne from Saving Silverman) C'mon, C'mon, C'mon, C'mon, C'mon, C'mon, :-( C'mon, C'mon, C'MON!! lol :-) |
Reviewed By: Shadowmoon On: April 10, 2003 22:31 CDT
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O.O' (in shock) one word, whoa.
I have to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 18:17 CDT
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Wahhh! *sniff* Poor Mina! It's--it's sooo sad! Wahhhh! ... Ok I'm done!*perky* Ok now ya have ta write more soon! k? ^_^0 |
Reviewed By: Nazgirl On: April 10, 2003 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree! You are the devil! But that's okay, because you are a brilliant writer and you need to post more. |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 14:11 CDT
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Princess Yuy, you are the DEVIL! great chapter btw |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 14:26 CDT
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Please update! I've been thinking about it all day! And I know that sounds really lame, but I NEED to read! |
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