| "Lies of Affection" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Sadistic Shadow On: February 01, 2004 00:44 CST
Comment/Review:
"I got to the Spainish part then had to stop reading. Squall is not hispanic because in ffviii there is no spain.Even if he was he wouldnt say it was from his mothers side because he never knew his mother." Maybe 'cause it's an AU fic, you twit? Anywho, I'm not a Spanish speaker (though I do take the class) but I noticed you were saying "la chica". Which does not translate to girl. It translates to THE girl. So the way you used it in a sentence sounded really strange.
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Title: no way
Reviewed By: nniijjaa On: August 31, 2003 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got to the Spainish part then had to stop reading. Squall is not hispanic because in ffviii there is no spain.Even if he was he wouldnt say it was from his mothers side because he never knew his mother. |
Reviewed By: Ghost On: July 26, 2003 07:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Quite interesting, if you don't mind please finish the story. |
Reviewed By: perfection On: February 16, 2003 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhh exciting!! writer more!! (please ^_^) |
