| "Goten and Trunk's sexual adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: : ) On: July 11, 2004 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great story. I loved it. One thing that bugged me though is the way you spelled yaoi in your summary. It's not yaio. But I get all weird about things like that so don't think I'm being mean, that's just how I am. Well, that's about it, bye.
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Reviewed By: Me On: January 17, 2004 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue! It's great!
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Reviewed By: AnimeloverFoever100 On: January 10, 2004 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well it was I don't know manybe it the Hentainess in me that liked this; anyway update soon.
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Reviewed By: Wyaoi On: January 02, 2004 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You re the best! i've never seen a so cool fiction!!! Please UP DATE IT!!!!!
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Title: ohyea
Reviewed By: darkgunaki On: December 05, 2003 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
tour sick, i love you
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Reviewed By: Kanimoto [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!!! YOU'D BETTER WRITE MORE SOON!!!!!! ~KR
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Reviewed By: Trupan23 On: October 28, 2003 23:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going
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Reviewed By: clowseal On: August 17, 2003 19:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
make another chapter please have them go all the way |
Reviewed By: Gothic Prince Vejita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 00:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was damn good, have them go all the way in the next chapter. And they are saiya-jin, like Hisaki mentioned, so they probably are old enough for saiyans.
You should read "Two Halves" up on fanfiction.net, great MiraiTrunks/ChibiGohan story!
Was it polemically sent
I wanna know what you meant
from "Mr. Crowley" by Ozzy Osbourne
Ptolemically Yours,
Gothic Prince Vejita. |
Reviewed By: Seifer On: March 14, 2003 05:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Err, hmm... If I wasn't such a pervert I wouldn't have liked it so much (-.0) But nonetheless, I haven't seen many trunks/goten fan fics to this magnitude |
Reviewed By: right-e-o On: February 28, 2003 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is so incredibly wrong.. they are WAY to young.. DISDUSTING! |
Reviewed By: Josav On: February 27, 2003 15:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Gross |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 14:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mm'kay...I feel like such a child molestor or something by saying that I liked this fic...but it's true!!! I do!!!
The only thing I can kind of say I didn't like was the way they would talk to eachother in some situations. I mean, I know they're both 10 and 11 years old (*sobs* I'm such a dirty teeanger...Bad Me!!! Bad Me!!!), but like, I don't think they'd be so enthusiastic (spelling?*) about it in a way where'd they say "Okay!!! Cool!!" about giving eachother head...heh...
And by this, I mean by so many !!! marks after "okay" and saying "cool"...come on now, they're heated with passion...you think they're really gonna say that? ^.^;; But that's just my opinion...
But none-the-less, I really liked it. Gah, I still feel so dirty for enjoying a fic about little 10 and 11 year old boys with really huge...well, ya know...(heh), but hey, it's Goten and Trunks. What can you do?
Besides, they're Saiya-Jin, so we can all bend the rules a bit for how their bodies work and grow rapidly for their ages...
^_^ Please update it soon!
~*Rizu-chan*~
GAAAHHH I feel so ashamed!!! *sobs* WHY MUST THEY BE SO HOT EVEN AS LITTLE CHILDREN!! BAD ME!!! BAD ME!!! *hits herself with blunt objects* X_x;; |
