Reviewed By: DJ On: December 24, 2002 07:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Here is an idea for the next chapter. Its up to you, mind you. Here it is:
Yugi and Mai are having a wonderful relationship, but another girl wants Yugi as well. She's an old friend of Yugi's, and she really wants him bad. She knows on where he lives, and goes there at night to try and seduce Yugi. Mai, however, comes in and sees the duo. She knows Yugi is loyal to her, so she and the other girl get into a monsterous catfight!
Who and what the girl is, its up to you. How it turns out is up to you too. Let me know in your next chapter. Keep it up! |
