| "A Proposal Of Marriage" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: chaviii On: December 12, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
boring
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Reviewed By: virginmary On: November 19, 2003 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
It needs more plus i'm not really into the way back then setting but all in all not that bad
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Reviewed By: Guccinike On: October 22, 2003 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got the right idea, but it needs more. I'd like to see sage get jealous over mia or something. I think he's already jealous of her, and rowen, but you know add someone else to make him feel the way she feels about him, and that bitch he's cheating on her with.
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Reviewed By: Ty_leo On: September 14, 2003 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic and all, but u need to finish it baby,.. I wanna know what's up with sage, and mia, and all that other good stuff. It's a good fic |
Reviewed By: Kathryn On: August 23, 2003 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your fanfic, but i hope that you update it soon. I wanna know what in the name of grated cheese is sage up to? |
Reviewed By: Cj On: August 13, 2003 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fanfic alot, and I hope u update it soon! Whyyyy is sage cheating on her!? Bastard! *sage I mean* |
Reviewed By: Super Star On: July 14, 2003 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I really like this fic. I hope that you get all the other chapters up soon. You're a pretty good writer. |
Reviewed By: Sylvia On: April 26, 2003 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo,
This fanfic is kewl. Everything about it makes it stand out. |
Reviewed By: Milky Way On: April 10, 2003 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fanfic, for one thing, it's not one you find everyday. It's very vivid, and it feels like i'm there! I think it's truly original, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Max the bishie deliverer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2002 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved when I got the preepted copy, I love it now...The emtions are believeable and the plot reative...All in all, I still cant believe that you spent two hours forjust part though....
Max
ps...and if you have no idea who this is...gimme a break...*laughs* |
