| "Lost Dream of Hope" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Rhapsody darkwaters [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 15:27 CST
Comment/Review:
It's hard to believe that you write such good stories at your age. That's amazing! I've always wanted to write stories like that.
I'm sorry, but Raven shouldn't rape Mika. I'm a party pooper, aren't I? |
Reviewed By: Wow! thanks 4 doing the kidnap On: January 21, 2003 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree that Raven should rape Mika so she can remember better -_-0 or so Raven thinks. But I don't think Van should be killed. By the way what school do u go to ? SIGNED
FIRST REVEIWER
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FOREVER FAN!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Dragon Master Skye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 15:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!! Plez update soon. |
Reviewed By: ope On: January 19, 2003 17:58 CST
Comment/Review:
you should have raven rape mmika. raven should also kill van. |
Reviewed By: wont tell On: January 19, 2003 17:57 CST
Comment/Review:
you should torture raven more |
Reviewed By: wont tell On: January 19, 2003 07:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
when does raven wipe out travis? |
Reviewed By: Starwake321 On: January 18, 2003 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, but there are a few small grammar mistakes that don't affect the story too much. Great plot and I don't have too much to tell you to improve, keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: The Unkowner???????????????? On: January 03, 2003 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so keep updating, and get Raven to see her again or get him to kidnap her, or just do whatever BUT make sure to have lots of DRAMA and some lovey dovey parts too ! |
