| "Only You" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 02:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BIG_DADDY: (Is now panting from the major amount of sap and unoriginallity and is propped up against a hiking stick) Must... not... give... in... to... sap...! (Passes out) Gotenks: I must agree. This never could have happened. But then again, this is original so I shouldn't complain. (His face suddenly goes green) *ugh* I think I'm gonna hurl! 17: Well, just don't ralf on my suit! (Raditz ralfs on his suit) Gotenks: Sorry, I couldn't help it! (17 blows him away and BIG_DADDY wakes up) Well, this fic was too unoriginal (as in like been done TOO MANY TIMES) but still (pulls out handkerchief) I never thought I'd have to use a handkerchief like this ever! (Blows into it) Make another! 17: If your so dramatic over a ramance fic like this then why do you care if she makes another? BIG_DADDY: I honestly don't know why!
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Reviewed By: Trupan 234 On: February 26, 2004 13:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write another
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Reviewed By: BIG_DADDY [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 18:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Pyro12, that rating does not justify your review. Please let them the style of writing, originality, enjoyment factor, and overall rating.
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Realy bad grammar.
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Reviewed By: kuriboh On: November 12, 2003 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please do not be offended by my review I am only saying that this idea is way to unoriginal. I mean, come on, there must a dozen stories exactly like this. hoWever, I had a good time readinG this fic. I like how you showed how gohan and videl got together I thought I would cry during this fic \sniff\. Anyway, keep up the good work and keep writing more gohan and videl fics, they make the cutest couple \sniff\.
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Reviewed By: goku=tofu On: November 12, 2003 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic, keep 'em coming.
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Reviewed By: piccolo fan On: November 10, 2003 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this story, yet it is one of those storys that have been done too many times (you should know which ones I'm talking about).
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Reviewed By: Griever_130 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**sniff** THAT WAS GREAT, I LOOK FORWARD TO MORE GOHAN AND VIDEL FANFICS !! **SNIFF** |
Reviewed By: dancehottie50 On: December 24, 2002 14:03 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG that was so good. I wish could write like you. Plz keep writing G/V fics |
