"Blinded" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 19:37 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that was a great chap. I can't wait to see what happens on his frist day of school. great work |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 23:18 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I thought that was not that sappy, Love this story keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2003 10:41 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I don't care if it is OOC that was damn good. loved it keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 18:23 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that was awsome, is all that needs to be said. Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 18:23 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that was awsome, is all that needs to be said. Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 18:18 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this has gotten to be a really good fic. keep up the good work, Is he trying to talk to his dad or mom? |
Reviewed By: Sakiku On: February 15, 2003 04:19 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well, I would have given you 100 points if it was possible, 100 out of 10 sounds good, doesn't it? Enjoyment Factor is so huge that it is off the charts, I love the idea of the blind Gohan and his mental powers.
I think, the Overall Rating should also be upgraded to 100 out of 10, I don't think I have ever encountered a story that has held me captive for so long.
Please see if you can also bring the chapters that you have already posted on FF.net, cause I really don't like FF.net very much cause it is always messed up.
And: write from your soul, give Gohan the feelings you have, perhaps it will help with your friend |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 14:27 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like it a lot keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 20:43 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: aw man another cliffhanger. Well any way Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 10:00 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow that was a sad chapter but well writen love it and keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Sunshine066 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 21:16 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMK... Now I don't have to run back to ff.net to read this fic! YAY! *confetti flies* Now all I need to do is get Android71 to do the same... ^_^() Then I'll be totally detatched from ff.net! But for now... I guess I can't... Well, once you get all of your chapters up here, and put a new one up, I'll start reviewing again! Have fun writing! (Little Voice: Cuz if you end it right there I'll scream!) |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 00:43 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is getting good keep it up |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 09:07 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is a good fan fic keep it up and I'm sure you will get just as much reviews on this one as you did on FF |
Reviewed By: Annoying Bitch On: February 15, 2003 22:18 CST Comment/Review: HURRY UP WITH THE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 11:37 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this is a wonderful fan fic. I'm surprised no body else has left a message besids me and the one above me |
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