| "Blinded" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The pain of a tormented soul, the rage of lost inocence. This is the reson I love fanfictions. You capture the fealings of insanity with such tallent and grace. You are a master, and I bow to you. The demons of my mind praise you, and your pain. PS: UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 17:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Update, damn it!!
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some gramatical errors, but everything else is great. I love angsty Gohan fics!!
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Reviewed By: 13angel On: November 14, 2003 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! it dosent seem that oc to me i think if it happen your way this probally how he end up> emotionaly anyway.i cant wait for you to up date
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Reviewed By: Arbron On: July 13, 2003 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a great story and I hope you update soon!
Just one little flaw...
Why does Gohan go to the extreme trouble of using his mind to visit Other World, when he wished for Instant Transmission? Why not just use that instead?
But anyway, that's just my opinion...
Keep up the good work!
Arbron |
Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off I can not begin to tell you how much I love this story. The plot in itself is very orginal. The way the story is going is great. I person love the way you came up with so many ways for Gohan to get used to being blind. TO be honest I wasn't expecting a story like this when I first read it. The whole bond thing between trunks,goten, and marron is wonderful. I've never seen anyone do a story quite like this. This story has played out well and I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter.
-Sb |
Reviewed By: homo On: May 31, 2003 08:07 CDT
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This is a really good fic |
Reviewed By: Animefan2017 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2003 20:03 CDT
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I wonder, are you going to add a new chapter? This is really getting good and we were left hanging when you haven't updated for a while. |
Reviewed By: Duh On: May 19, 2003 17:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great fic! I just can't wait for the ending |
Reviewed By: Da On: May 15, 2003 17:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
great fic keep it up |
Reviewed By: A-hole On: April 19, 2003 13:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please Hurry With The Fic!! |
Reviewed By: A-hole On: April 19, 2003 12:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: o_O On: April 14, 2003 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so fun! i love this story. please keep it up ^_^ |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the ending of this it was funny. well any way it was great. love it. |
Reviewed By: Bastard On: April 12, 2003 00:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep the good work up and hurry with the updates. |
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